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for Dirty Little Secret

by gingermaya

schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Even I'm scared, Kakashi must be terrified! I don't know whether I like such an evil Naruto, wheres the love? Your a fantastic writer and you've got me glued :)
person satterb
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As always, your updates are well worth the wait!!! This fic is so good and very original. So much so that I can't even begin to guess what is going to happen next. Looking forward with much anticipation to the next chapter...thanks!
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story's like film noir: it's dirty and gritty and dark, about people who are dirty and gritty and dark, and the story is ugly and the seting is bleak., and any bits of hope or pleasure and comfort that come through just serve to highlight and contrast and intensify the grit and blackness, not relieve it. This is, in no way, a beautiful story, but I love every word, even when I don't have the right mind to read it.
person satterb
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens...Naruto seems so regal, but I guess you have to be when dealing with village politics. I am dying to see how Kakashi really feels about making his relationship with Naruto "public". Thank you for the update. Looking foward to the next!
person HikanDas
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome where this is going. XD
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe this is better than the manga at the moment XD
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that Naruto is not going to " Make him love him, adore the ground he walked on, the air he breathed – and then crush him like the roach he was." Please tell me . Keep up the great work.
person satterb
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE BRILLIANT! With my eyes wide and my mouth hanging open I read this entire update. I absolutely did not see that coming. I love mean Naruto! This is the first fic I've ever read that did not have him playing the pitiful sap or tortured martyr! I'm so glad you're back and bringing your mad skills with you. Also, I was wondering whatever happend to Pein...
person HikanDas
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing more chapters; you've got a wonderful naruto/kakashi slightangst going on. XO
person polaris
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this Naruto but I LOVE this Kakashi!MORE,PLEASE