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for Dirty Little Secret

by gingermaya

person mmartini
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im in love with this story. And this is not that all happy and walking on the cloud type of love. Im anxious, and standing on my toes, and yet im addicted to it!
Poor Kakashi, i dont want him to be hurt, i mean emotionally:) He is already so vulnerable. And Naruto is a good man, he is the Hokage! But you are the goddess of this story so you decide. I love it, so please continue!
person satterb
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I guess he's going to keep Kakashi thin and weak...I think that makes sense. I love this story and I am always happy when I see it updated. It's great to have you back!
person Mija
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh you know I love this fic sooooooo much, I love the tender moments and the smex of course between the two of them, but I am worried about how cold Naruto is getting, does he really intend to hurt Kakashi mentally, does he really hate him that much, and is it true?? did Kakashi really have time to save Sakura but did nothing only to save himself?? cause there are always two sides to every story, sooooo I cant wait to see what happenes, to know Naruto lusts after his sensei is one thing, but to hate him as well, that makes me sad, but then again it adds much more to the fic, cant wait to read more, thanks for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija
person nm1716
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and can't wait to see what happens next. I hope it does not end badly with Naruto and Kakashi. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god its getting dark again :( But...very confused. I would love it if Naruto ended up falling in love with Kakashi instead of breaking him.
person polaris
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your fic is my drug!I need more!(sorry for english)
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:P Finally they are Master and Pet, but now i have no idea what could happen from this point on, looking forward to next chapter :D
person satterb
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Kakashi's got a master! But I felt sooo sorry for him when Naruto was talking to him about Sakura and everything. Naruto seems so harsh, but I have to keep reminding myself that this is what Kakashi wants. I would like to hear more about Tenzou and Kakashi...maybe in a flashback or something.
person satterb
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit this is so damned good. Thanks for updating today...I cannot wait to see what happens next. (gives an evil grin)
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! This is officially my most favorite present this year! Thank you! More please, I need so much more XD