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for Dirty Little Secret

by gingermaya

person satterb
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH! YES! Naruto is the PERFECT dom! I couldn't for the life of my figure out what the shoe polish might be for...guess I have a one track mind haha! But then, so did Kakashi. I was also suprised to see him in the village without his mask! What a wonderful story this is...I'm so happy when I see you've updated...I hope to get another update soon, but if the holidays keep you too busy, then have fun and see you later!
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story - very well thoughtout, and strong reasoning for Kakashi to take a submissive role.

looking forward to more chapters!
person polaris
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! An evil cliffy right before Xmas too! I do hope Santa brings me a chapter for Xmas XD
person no one in particular
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, but you sure keep us hanging on the edge of our seats! Well I guess that keeps us coming back for more. I can't wait for the next update.
person polaris
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your fiction is wonderful!I love it!Sorry for my poor english,I would like to write more
person satterb
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That was sooo damn HOT! I love this story so much. At first I thought you were going to add Baki and his assistant to the mix...but I liked the more intimate scene between Naruto and Kakashi better. I like how you have kept this fic slow and steady, building up and keeping the suspense tight. Thanks for the long update!
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hottttt. best.chapter.ever.
person Ainsel
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o__o this fiction is... appalling, absolutely wonderful.
I love, really.
person polaris
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOH MY GOD!