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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you make Naruto a real "dirty talker". I love this dark side of Naruto that you have created! This is absolutely one of my all time favorite fics. Please keep up this marvelous work!
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ordinarily that kind of caring/controlling bait-and-switch behavior is seriously creepy... but this is Naruto, and through the magic of third person narrative, we know that Kakashi... probably needs it. That said, Naruto putting Kakashi's hat on and telling him to go home was... not sweet, but something very similar. Caring, still. Life's dark and twisted but getting better, and the pair of them, as life has made them, are now made for each other.
I look forward to updates. :3
I look forward to updates. :3
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome last chapter. initially i was kinda frustrated by the hints about tenzo and kakashi but this last chapter was great. your writing really leaves things to the imagination and its subtlety *while not filling it with a ridiculous number of graphic lemons* makes the story so much richer and the suspense much more intense.
cant wait to read more!
cant wait to read more!
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Loooove your "dirty, dark" Naruto...thanks for the great update!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Naruto is being kinder to Kakashi, but I have to admit that his dark side is so damn sexy...
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the experiment: What if Kakashi loses his sharingan and agility? How will he react? Its interesting, and I think so far you catch the line. The characters are so human, vulnerable. Its great. Goog starting point, good plot:) And one more thing I really appreciate that you update often, Im full of expectation every day:) So thank you im waiting the next chapter.
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, so sad yet beautiful. It's well written and I like the way you describe the characters'emotions.
I look forward to reading more ^^
I look forward to reading more ^^
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gai's words were beautiful...Your writing is so damned entertaining. Looking forward to the next installment.
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"...a decommissioned weapon is destroyed, so as not to take up space and valuable resources for the newer, working models."
That gave me the shivers. Outright shivers. I never thought about it that way before, but it makes so much sense. Reminds me of Kakashi's wry look when he says to Naruto over Zabuza's grave that shinobi are tools.
I love this story, by the way. In case you couldn't tell.
That gave me the shivers. Outright shivers. I never thought about it that way before, but it makes so much sense. Reminds me of Kakashi's wry look when he says to Naruto over Zabuza's grave that shinobi are tools.
I love this story, by the way. In case you couldn't tell.
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! That was really suprising. Please keep up the great work. I love your writing. Your characters are really well developed. I can't even begin to guess where you are going with this which makes it really fun to read. Thanks again for a great update.