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for Dirty Little Secret

by gingermaya

person Vesca
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now I'm really liking this story after the last few chapters. you're making it so very dark and realistic to what would be the very real possibility of the destruction after ... well, after the destruction. Keep up the dark and lovely work! And feel free to torture Pain some more...
person Kipling
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT WOW.
person satterb
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just want you to know that I love this story. It's dark and angsty, but not that whiney, cry in your green tea crap that we see so much of. Poor Kakashi, somehow I don't think Naruto will be as optimistic about Kakashi working at the academy...that's just the vibe I got...I could be wrong though. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Stinky Horowitz
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Kakashi did his best, but I know he won't see it that way. I wondered how many of the attackers he killed; I guess if I were Tenzou I'd be looking for ways to convince Kakashi that he'd done his share of the fighting.

It was smart to make Naruto and Kyuubi one entity; compassion from the Hokage is less likely and makes Kakashi's emotional pattern believable because his feelings of worthlessness are reinforced by an authority figure.
person Ainsel
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sad .. But it's really wonderful
person Stinky Horowitz
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've always thought that the worst torture for Kakashi would be what he'd do to himself. I'm enjoying your writing immensely. Thanks for the update.
person polaris
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so sad,but BEATIFUL!
person Stinky Horowitz
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm impressed with the AU you set up so quickly. I can definitely see it all in my mind; Kakashi's characterization and the logic behind his actions fit well within this world. I'm very curious to see where you go from here.