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by Vesca

person deviltiger
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Where do you come up with all your wonderful ideas? I can't wait for the next chapter.
person melissa
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DRIVE-BY AFFECTION!!!!1!11!1one
*GLOMP*
Rereading, because I like this, and it was easier to find here than LJ, and perhaps I'll send a random review attack through the LJ messaging system too. Maybe! :D

XD oh my god, Jiraiya in the corner and his RESEARCH. The Icha Icha version of Sleeping Beauty is coming right up, I can SMELL it.
Oh well, Jiraiya can't possibly do it any hankier than Anne Rice did. X3

Drama, yay, but intelligent commentary about the intelligent parts of this story just isn't going to happen at two-thirty in the morning. SO! HOORAY, SOLICITING SEX AMONG THE NURSES.

SO, HELLO I LOVE YOU, and I like this story much. Life happens, but don't forget, okay? Or the water spirit, or Not The Mommy, or the space opera. :D
person RyuEarth
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is it too much to ask to have Kakashi do it? ^^;
Thanks for the update! I loved it! XD
person Anise
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't it be nice if all medical problems could be solved with a solution like that ;) Very informative chapter about what everyone had been put through and I liked the idea of Sasuke having to teach at the academy as punishment, it would serve him right :) I'm a little concerned about what memories Iruka may be missing, let's hope they may just be little bits and pieces and not entire people and places, definitely looking forward to the next chapter it's going to be interesting :)
person aoh
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha! i can so see kakashi's expression at tsunade's last words! LOL. please write another chapter =)
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cackles*
I love your brains.
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It's a great start.
person polaris
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! PLEASE CONTINUE!
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a fascinating beginnning. :D