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for Deception, Love, and Assassination

by Raelyn

person Kat
schedule March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tha long-ass review above? Yeah, that was mine. I just didn't realize name and e-mail were optional before i clicked submit!
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
Please update!
person demonicange1
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Just want to say that... I think i can guess a tad where this is going and would really like to read more! XD It's a really intrigueing plot line and I LOVE how Naruto is the prince, not Sasuke. XD Very nice! But anyways, see that you haven't updated this in a while (January?) and I was wondering if you could just tell me if you are planning to update or not. (Cuz if you are, i'll add your story to my bookmarks and watch out for an update, if not, then I will just cry momentarily and move on, yeah?) Well, anyways, let me know! I'd really like more of prince!Naruto. THANKS!
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I wanted to ask you is this Sasuke among them in this line at the end of 5 chapter or it is just my imagination.

"They were all clad in black clothing and all but one had their head covered concealing their faces."

Is that one Sasuke?
person Lynn
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story ^^ lol just imagining Naruto with a harem makes me laugh. But then again imagining Naruto as a prince makes me laugh too. This fic gives me warm fuzzies even though it is kind of depressing....<.< love it!

Please continue!

jag älskar dig!

Much love from Örebro, Sweden <3
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so great:) I can't wait you to update:) But what I really don't understand is why would Sasuke join some special guards to watch of Naruto's family and Naruto himself when he was sent to kill him and destroy them. (And also because Sasuke really cares about his family not some other family). Well, if it is Sasuke at the end. And why did you put this obstacle with a baby? That can be resolved really easily with some artificial insemination or some other technique. This is after all Naruto universe where is everything possible...

And I will say once again story is awesome:)
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how they'll get back together? OoO I Hope they get back together! ;_;
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the better fanfictions that I have read on AFF, and I've read quite a few. ^^ Your plot is fantastic, your writing style is exceptional, and your characters are simply loveable and easy to sympathize with. I will continue to follow this with anticipation! Good job and thank you for sharing this with us!
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have been meaning to read this for a while now. I read your Mpreg and liked your style of writing, so I knew that I would probably like this as well... Sure enough, I love this fic. So far it seems rather tragic, yet extremely intriguing.

I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon.

-Akiru-
person Michiru
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I'm loving this!! I haven't visited adultfanfiction.net in AGES and now I have a reason to do so!! Can't wait for the next update! :D