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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke isn't dead, is he?
Either way, awesome story! I love how you pick the perfect moments to have cliff hangers. ^^
Either way, awesome story! I love how you pick the perfect moments to have cliff hangers. ^^
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Stupid, stupid Sasuke. BUT THERE MY FAMILY!!!!!! (Rolls eyes) Idiot. Sniff, poor Naruto!!! Why does Naruto have to love such an idiotic self-centered bastard? WHY!?!? My favorite line though is when Naruto is telling Sasuke that the Uchiha will cease to exist. Muhahahahaha!!!!!^^ I love this line!!!!^^
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I love it!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've created such a detailed world in this story and I really like it. The interactions between the characters are great and I'm a complete sucker for AUs where Naruto's parents (one or both) are alive.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have hope that Sasuke is alive thanks to that last part! I hope I'm right! After all, Minato didn't exactly state that he was dead. But now things are all complicated. Buuuh. Thank you for the quick updates! They make my days.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting. I just read chps 1-4 earlier today so it was nice to see an update right after. lol. I dont know what to say, but you have a fan reading and wanting more.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I truly like your story but if I will have to read a het in it then I will have to stop. Please find a way for naruto to have an heir (if that is truly necessary) without him having to sleep with anyone else (i.e. artificial insemination, etc.). I always read these stories where they put it as necessary for a child and I have always thought it a betrayal of this "true love" between Sasuke and Naruto. No matter how you slice it, if you pledge your love to someone then no matter what you should never cheapen it by being with someone else, regardless of the reason.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems very fitting that Sasuke would join the elite group of guards for Naruto's family, that was a nice touch. Thank you for posting.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ACK! I CRIED when Naruto was forced to have an heir, when he thinks Sasuke is dead. So Sasuke is going to be a silent guardian now? Interesting. I'm starting to really...really...hate Minato right now.
Love the plot as usual. I truly haven't read an exciting story such as this in a LONG time.
Please please update soon :)
Love the plot as usual. I truly haven't read an exciting story such as this in a LONG time.
Please please update soon :)
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is very well written. The plot was interesting and you're a very good writer. I absolutely love how you described each character, and the interaction among them. Naruto will see Sasuke again, when he was in danger one of these day. And how smart Minato was to use Sasuke's love to Naruto and devotion to his clan to make him his pawn.
About a seperate prelogue,I can just imagine how interesting that would be - Sasuke's seduction and being charmed away and Naruto's pursuit of him.
About a seperate prelogue,I can just imagine how interesting that would be - Sasuke's seduction and being charmed away and Naruto's pursuit of him.