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for Deception, Love, and Assassination

by Raelyn

schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok now I'm a little pissy. No naruto baby's PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! it just makes it all so wrong. on so many levels. specially if it is a known character. I really love this story and check for updates daily, but that just makes me a little angry. He should know hes not dead because there is no proof, and in all reality sasuke shouldn't be able to stay away from him anyway... Please reconsider!!!!!!! I love this story way to much to have to muddle through something like that.
person Ivy
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The way you wrote the questioning was very good! I wouldn't have believed Sasuke's excuse either. Can't wait for chapter 5 ;-)
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pout* I am sad..... I love angst, it makes my day! Please continue soon!
person dark
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this st is so great i totally love it. is well writen the plot is just fantastic and the stor line is just manificent i can not wait for the next chapter G.L. (good luck):)
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Sasuke is so not executed. He just can't be.

I'm still loving this story and all the interesting drama that comes with it. Wonderful character interpretations, especially Naruto and Sasuke. Please update soon :)
person Munez
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...He isn't really dead, right? Right? RIGHT?! Holy fuck. Aw man! This has depressed me after a shitty day. I hope you feel responsible for this well-written, mental trauma. I look forward to the next update. It better be the Prozac to this depressive chapter!

I do love this story so.
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
......angry sigh...... WHY!!!!!!!!!!! I need more...This is such a bad tease! Please update soon?
person Dragon7
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
person Kryst Sutures
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw shit. I'm not liking where this is going for Sasuke... I kind of feel bad for him. He deserves some sort of punishment but I don't want him to die. Gah. Wow. This is a fantastic story, though. Very well written. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
person tovah
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so frustrated this is such a good story but your chapter lengths along with how long it takes you to update are driving me crazy. I think I might just have to stop reading your updates until at least a couple of chapters have been posted or I will be drivin mad. I do have so much hope for this story, I guess I will just wait to see if you can make it the kinda great story we all love to read.