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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing first chapter! Very tense and beautifully written. Can't wait to see what happens next ;-)
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely, bloody fantastic. Literally!
This first chapter had it all. I can't even describe how excited I am to read this story. You have already captured my attention and excitment. The descriptions were beautifully detailed, the plot was interesting, the smex was hott, and there was the most thrilling cliffie at the end.
Well done, simply well done. I have not read a story this intriguing in a while.
Please please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to see what happens next!
This first chapter had it all. I can't even describe how excited I am to read this story. You have already captured my attention and excitment. The descriptions were beautifully detailed, the plot was interesting, the smex was hott, and there was the most thrilling cliffie at the end.
Well done, simply well done. I have not read a story this intriguing in a while.
Please please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule
November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. So small yet so emotional. I will be watching for it.
schedule
November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start though that was an evil cliffie!
schedule
November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I'm extreamly interested to see where this story goes. So please write / post some more. :D