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The more I read this fic, the more I really LOVE it! I'm so addicted to the Tenzo/Iruka relationship, I might just die when they finally get together (I really hope they do). I like Kakashi in this and he and Genma's relationship is really hot. Poor Raidou! He needs some love, I can't wait to see what happens with him! I love this fic and do a little happy dance when I come across your updates! Are you on LJ? I'd like to friend you, perhaps chat/fangirl over Naruto (Cause you're writing about my favorite characters) some time? Keep up the great work!
Haru

that was so hot,kakashi-genma is my favourite couple,your work is splendid as always

Wow!! Thanks so much - the story is real good. Will be dying for the update!!!
Hope Tenzo still has a chance with Iruka. He's real nice.)))
But what about Raido? Will Izumo just walk all over his love. Yeah, I know Kotetsu/Izumo
is kinda classic, but still...I think he deserves a happy ending.)))

Please please please let Iruka hook up with Tenzou....And I just about died when you had Ko rimming a WET Izumo...oh my god! Anyway. Keep up the great work. This is just too much and that's the way I like it. I was so happy to see this updated. I look forward to another update soon i hope.

review... sorry about only rambling about the romance and little else... your story is quite fantastic overall, i was really happy to see you've updated :)

except... geez. i just don't like kakashi in this =_= the pairing could be so good, but the sadistic alpha male and "whore" stuff is just too much for me... i really hope that as this progresses, he'll be overcome with lust at the sight (or touch, for that matter) of his sexy lieutnant and admit to himself just how much he wants to bottom for once! *devilish grin*

i looooved kotetsu's line about being short. i laughed so hard, and liked him so much for it, too. izumo/rai is so good, and it makes me me sad in a way, because it means little chance for kotetsu/izumo, which would be equally beautiful. if only tetsu didn't pity himself so much - they both have little selfconfidence, zumo and tetsu i mean, but... well zumo has his great new lover to cheer him up, and tetsu has noone. poor darling.

at least tenzou/iruka's gonna be sweet.

thanks for update,I love this wonderful story!

Yay! You've finally updated!!!!!!!!!!! I was just thinking of this story the other day and wishing like hell there was more. The story line is intense and the characters are so damned fleshed out that it's almost like real life. Your depiction of the setting is extremely well done also. I really appreciated the extra extra long chapter as well and since it's titled part 1, I'm hoping that another update is coming sooner than later. God, thank you for the update, It was food for the soul.

SO WONDERFUL!PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE

I was checking your aff account for updates. ^^ hahaha.. yeah, sure.. as if you wouldn't update on Y but rather on aff. But still... could have been. ^^
Love love love this story. ^__^ (You already know i do) And the second chapter must be the longest i've ever seen..

Update soon? .. Please?.. ^__^

Aaauuuugghhh! Hold on to what hat? I lost the hat and started pulling out the hair! (lol) Hands down...the best damn story out there and there are quite a few! I absolutely loved it and will wait dilligently for the next update. You must have been writing like a mad man because that was a really lengthy chapter (felt like Christmas early...thanks!) Again, I can't begin to express how great your story is and just keep up the good work...