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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, just wow. So it was a happy ending after all. I was shocked that you killed them but that made it all okay. Man, i started this chapter a while ago but have been looking for a chance to finish it. Great work. Really amazing stuff. Anywho, fabulous story. Love how many twists there were. You really did a wonderful job with the mystery and danger elements and of course the smex was mouthwatering as always. Great story.
Cheers
Meg
Cheers
Meg
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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think the story was really good but the ending was a complete and utter let down. It seemed as if you just didn't know what to write so you just threw in another lemon and called it a day. The chapters before the ending were great and then I get to the last 3 it just seemed to loose it's luster. I didn't like the ending at all but everything else was good.
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet. even when they are dead lol ^_^ those two really were meant for each other lol. can't wait for your next story ^_^
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a happy ending even thought they're dead. good story anyway!
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg... O_O
ok, now you have me curious..
and not so damn sad.
can't wait to see if you have more planned!
ok, now you have me curious..
and not so damn sad.
can't wait to see if you have more planned!
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a great way to spend eternity! resting in each other's arms... waiting to be born again!
What though the radiance which was once so bright
Be now for ever taken from my sight,
Though nothing can bring back the hour
Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;
We will grieve not, rather find
Strength in what remains behind...
thank you for this epic... it was brilliant, funny, poignant and very enjoyable.
Well done, grasshopper! well done!
~anz~
ps: I guess movie themes abound in this one. "Splendor In The Grass," very appropriate! ~_^!
Be now for ever taken from my sight,
Though nothing can bring back the hour
Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;
We will grieve not, rather find
Strength in what remains behind...
thank you for this epic... it was brilliant, funny, poignant and very enjoyable.
Well done, grasshopper! well done!
~anz~
ps: I guess movie themes abound in this one. "Splendor In The Grass," very appropriate! ~_^!
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
breaking the news to kurenai made me really sad, i almost cried. sad to see it come to an end but it was great.
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a death fic. I'm impressed. I didn't see it coming until maybe the chapter before. Really excellent stuff. Wow. Awww, poor guys. I'm sure Raidou will step up to the plate now but I just can't help but think that he doesn't have Kakashi's commanding presence. Anywho, excellent chapters. You had be fairly surprised. Didn't think you were a death fic kinda girl.
Cheers
Meg
Cheers
Meg
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story but I don't know whether I am okay with Iruka and Kakashi dying. It just made the story too sad. They were really the only interesting couple in here.
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very sad, but i'm glad asuma's still alive.
and this new form of government just might work.
and this new form of government just might work.