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by sesshabattousai

schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GASP!
now you reaaly have to update.

PLEASE

CHIBI Sango offers the biggest cookies 4 faster uploads...this is getting too good!!!

update!!!
person RyuEarth
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
finally! the black cloud of 'things will now begin to not be good' shows up! DX
But still, thanks for the update! It was a nice twist to have Iruka's uncle being the bad guy! T_T
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was fun. both kakashi and asuma are wipped lol.
person satterb
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet...I love Asuma in this...he really is in love with Kurenai isn't he...
person micahn10
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* I can just see Kurenai having them trussed up in suit and dress waltzing to wedding chimes before either of them can blink. Still loving this story, i wasn't kidding over on LJ when i said reading it was like an addiction. *sigh* I almost died when i had to miss 3days. XD
person RyuEarth
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD Have you read/heard of "Shiine" on ff,net? cause that part with the foot made me think of that big time! XD
Thanks for the update, this chapter was cute! ^^
person satterb
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seems Kakashi has a one track mind...Your dialog between Iruka and Kakashi was really well put together. Thanks for the great update!
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sweet chapter! :D
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story. First a kind I think and I really like how you build up the plot and story line. of course the smex is always good I really enjoy this story and wanted to say keep up the good work. ^_^
person RyuEarth
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes, i really feel like something bad is going to happen, but, I really loved Genma in chapter 12! He was so cute and so sneaky! XD
Chapter 13 was hot as well! ^^
Thanks for the update!