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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh...Raidou has lost his damn mind!
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I had been following this story but didn't review cause I'm a lazy ass but this chapter had been worked up. WTF!!!! You can't just stick your dick in someone just cause! I hope Kakashi punishes him for this!!! Afterall Ibiki did die for inciting the rape on Iruka. No punishment for Rai is just crappy! *pouts*
Thanks for being so diligent in updating. You keep me semi-sane in the madness around in me RL now. Ciao~
Thanks for being so diligent in updating. You keep me semi-sane in the madness around in me RL now. Ciao~
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as always excellent! what will become of our intrepid warlord? he loses his temper and virginity on the same day!
but the question is... what is to become of General Raidou? apparently he has feelings for Kashi... I have a bad feeling he's gonna bear strong hate for that slave... er ... scribe. It's obvious he desires Kashi.... wants him bad! So how far will he go to have him... ? betrayal? murder? and then there's the question of ibiki's handlers... they really won't be pleased...
but a spy is a spy...
but the question is... what is to become of General Raidou? apparently he has feelings for Kashi... I have a bad feeling he's gonna bear strong hate for that slave... er ... scribe. It's obvious he desires Kashi.... wants him bad! So how far will he go to have him... ? betrayal? murder? and then there's the question of ibiki's handlers... they really won't be pleased...
but a spy is a spy...
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Normally I'd say, what crap about having sex so soon after being raped, but I can see how in a situation such as this Iruka might have become a bit desensitized to the whole thing. What I do wonder about though is the physical. Has enough time passed for having sex with Kakashi to not be impossible or extremely painful with the damage that being gangraped caused? I'd gotten the impression that only a day or two had passed.
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No! Bad Raidou! He doesn't realize how much Genma likes him (I hope) and how much he's going to hurt Genma for thinking such things! I hope that Genma doesn't get hurt by Raidou's lust for Kakashi! T_T
But I loved the way Iruka couched Kakashi into having sex with him, that was kind of cute! XD
Thanks for the update!
But I loved the way Iruka couched Kakashi into having sex with him, that was kind of cute! XD
Thanks for the update!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love innocent Kakashi! That was yummy...thanks
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All right! Kakashi's not a virgin anymore!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS HOT! and even tho he's uke, iruka can sure be commanding... but raidou thinkin of kakashi while doing genma..not cool man...girl, chick-person-thing...
um..... ^_^''
*smiles awkardly and gives cookies as bribe* more please!
um..... ^_^''
*smiles awkardly and gives cookies as bribe* more please!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
rai is a bit touchy isn't he. what's with that? i hope in time he falls for genma.
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9 and 10 was soo hot!!!