rate_review Reviews

usually i Like Ibiki. I adore him. He's an awesome manly man. In this fic, he went from misguided to treasonous. I didn't like that. But i love this story. And i look forward to further chapters. :D

poor Raidou. :D

conversation awkwardness, oh yeah. LOL

I just don't like seeing him as a common bully. He's got class. :D But I do understand sometimes muses, stories, are weird that way. They'll totally write themselves! :D

Its a gr8 story. Its good that you bring such depth & awareness to Iruka and Kakashi and even Genma and Raidou.

Iruka does need his freedom but he also needs to get his self respect back. Without it no one will take him seriously. Iruka needs justice so he can truly move on with his life and become who he was meant to be. His greedy family needs to be brought to justice. :D

Yay! Another great update! Thank you for updating so quickly. I can't wait to see what comes next.

Poor Genma! I wonder if he even got off? (and ironically the ending was my favorite part) ^^;
Thanks for the update!

omg that was excellent!!! who would have thought that a naive kakashi could work out so well...ur a genius!!! but i do wonder how that awkward conversation will turn out....poor raidou..... and genma uke?..... just....wow lol

A new fic yahoo!! have i been gone that long?!! (but then again you are a super updater ^_^)

i've read from the first chapter. i love how this fic is shaping up ^_^ . poor poor 'ruka. does he still not remember what happened to him? kakashi killed ibiki in a real gruesome manner it kinda made me queasy lol. oh and the rai kashi crush i really cute. i hope rai doesn't lay out his feeling to get hurt. genrai is totally cool too, i hope something develops there.

Thank you:) this one is a little different.
I read it straight through!

I have to tell you that I feel you have the right flavor for
Kakashi as a military man in charge. It is a very precarious
position. Such a balancing game between leadership with loyalty
and respect, and leadership with fear. Next to impossible to be
a leader and a friend.

You have such a sweet blossoming love for our heros, but it is
a politcal time bomb. Looking forward to how you work it out!

PS - I loved Kakashi ripping out a hart!!!
( this univers's version of chidori!)

I knew that wouldn't end well. Damn, Kakashi is pissed!

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

Holy hell! That was quite a retribution on Kakashi's part. Keep up the great work. Another wonderful update!