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by sesshabattousai

schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yowza1 that jackass lucked out for now. and please don't show any mercy to those bastards.
person satterb
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Iruka...I can't wait to see what punishment lies in store for Ibiki! Another great chapter. Thanks!
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would hate to be there during their morning meeting. Holy shit.
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh no! poor Iruka! and to top it all off you left it as a cliffhanger!!!!
You're evil!
Please UPDATE soon! :D
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! Drama!
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG i love the story, and i love that you update every day. ^^ can we get another chapter today? XDD more more more, i'm a fan fic whore.
person RyuEarth
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't want Kakashi to loose face, but I still want revenge on Ibiki and the others!
I'm torn between the too! DX
But still, thanks so much for the update! I hope that things will be ok! =)
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooh gives me shivers. But its so sad. Slavery is such a twisted thing. Its so sad. If Rai reall ythoughtit through though it isn't just that this is a slave butif he were to think of desecration of personal property, that is one respected one's general one would not touch the generals'property no matter what the provocation. Poor Kakashi. Poor Iruka. What a mess. Iruka used to be somebody before he was soldin to slavery, maybe Kakashi could help him get back is self respect as well as his land and titles?
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this stroy getting better!
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well... our intrepid warlord sleeps in the nude! does this make him a semi-virgin? i'm very concerned for iruka though...

excellent as always..