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by sesshabattousai

person RyuEarth
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just noticed that you had answered my question, and thanks for telling me! I like that he spent along time with his second master =)
And this chapter rocked! Thanks for the update! I loved it alot! XD
person satterb
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story...I also really enjoyed reading "The Trick". I appreciate how you update so often even though I know that writing is difficult and authors can't always update as quickly as you do. Thanks for all your hard work. Can't wait to read more.
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait til Kakashi finds out!
person RyuEarth
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No No NO NO NO!!!! THat was so freakin evil! I hope that Ibiki get's his balls/thrid leg cut off for something like that! DX
Thanks for the update though! =)
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm jealous. I've always wanted to make Ibiki a bad guy but am always in fear of his fans. they can be as scary as him. Amazing chapter! Poor Iruka. It's horrible that Kakashi wasn't his first but i'm excited to see the smack down he lays on the men. And the tenderness to Iruka when he gets back. Keep going. I'm so hooked it's not even funny. You've got a real flare for AUs.
Cheers
Meg
person BennyPeace
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I wish you hadn't left off there!
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Kakashi is possesive already! Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh! Good chapters. I know i should sign back into my account out of this joint account but seriously, so much effort. Any who... Interesting twist. I'm curious to see how you play this out. It's certainly your own story already. You write so beautifully. I'm so excited for more. I love the speed at which you update. I can't believe you get a new chapter out almost every day. God, if only i had the time. Anyway, loved the possessive kakashi. the mine made my shiver. Loved Kakashi's reaction to Iruka last chapter. Purrrrrr. I've been writing not kakairu a bunch lately and i've apparently been missing them. Damn they're so hot together. And so sweet too. Gah! I can't wait for more! I want it to be tomorrow already so I can get more plot. Amazing stuff!!!
Cheers
meg
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome aweseome awesome! :D
person dino1
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really cool idea! Can't wait to see more of the world!