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by sesshabattousai

person RyuEarth
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD It was Ibiki! XD I'm going to hope that he gets bunished for that (possibly?)
Thanks for the update! I loved Kakashi's lack of modesty and Raidou was so cute! =)
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! The dominating yet naive Kakashi! Who wouldn't?
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Mine...my property, my business. Understood?"

I LOVE IT!
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooooooooooooo goooooooooood!! Omg it's so good. I adore how much detail you put into the set up. It's amazing. I'm so glad you're writing this. You're gonna do so much with it. brilliant. Please keeper going as quickly as possible. I'm so excited i'm literally wetting my pants...so wait, i meant figuratively. Yeah, i'm figuratively wetting my pants.
Cheers
Meg
person Leeana69
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Iruka. He almost got away from that life, and then Kakashi dragged him right back into it. Poor boy. :(

Hmmmmm, I'm wondering how this relationship is going to progress. I'm loving everything so far. ;D
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well a BJ is a start. i'm guessing he'll start doing his other duties in the morning heh heh he.
person RyuEarth
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter! thanks for the update! =)
person Anon
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great first two chapters! Please continue!!
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Update soon please!!!^^
person Sylvir
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God you're back. Loved the other story and this one too. I hope you update this one like that one. Can't wait to read more, keep up the good work.