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by sesshabattousai

person Raholea
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O

YOU KILLED THEM!!!!!!!!!! *sobs*
I .... *whines* ... at least you let them die together....

I have really, really, enjoyed this story, and i have no clue about how much more you're going to write, but damn, i think for me the story ended with Kakashi and Iruka dying. I will continue to read, but I'm gonna have to cry over this one for a while....
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh!! tell me you didn't kill cute little 'ruka. that will be so sad. please don't do it okay. you made my heart stop lol.
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my GOSH again!!! i can't believe it. i just can't. both of them are gone. at least they found love before they died.
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
kurenai's gonna kill asuma. i pity him when he gives her the news [unless kashi and ruka went to her in a dream] she'll clean his clock good.

that little bastard kabuto got exactly what he deserved. itachi too!

at least they're together in death...

i wonder about the aftermath... did kashi die in vain? or will true policy and change take place... i know : a statue is erected in their honor! {one can always hope ~ aren't monuments tribbutes, anyway?]
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Sniff...sniff....* WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 'Ruka! 'Kashi!! My poor babies! *Snuggles them*

Wow, this story had me hooked from beginning to end! I loved it!
person naracest
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Duh duh duuuuuuh!!!!! And the plot thickens yet again! Will Kakashi be strong enough to step in time? I kinda like the pairing of Itachi and Kabuto. don't ask me why. Anywho, keep going, this story is a monster.
Cheers
meg
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think this is really one of the few times i cant wait for morning to come.-grins- cant wait to see what happens at muster. plz email me whenu update. -hands author cookie-
person naracest
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very very very nice. Sry i've been so busy and haven't been able to keep up but wow. Love how this is going. I don't know why but I like the fact that Genma got down with someone other than raidou. And you've added the sexiest bad guy to the mix. yeah, i love Itachi. Too bad he's a bad guy in your fic but oh well. As always i'm on the edge of my seat, waiting to see where you go next.
Cheers
Meg
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
kashi better not kill himself before he even gets to camp! and what the heck are raido and asuma just sitting around and chitchatting for? they better get a move on. fast! update soon and let me know. plz and ty. -hands authoress cookie-
person satterb
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Raidou is such an idiot! This is getting really exciting. Thanks for the update!