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damn. i was just wondering if itachi would make an appearance in this story. oh, and here is the cookie i promised. -hands authoress a humongous cybercookie- there's more where that came from. plz update and let me know. =^-^=

Whoot! Gai-ness!!

Man, everytime I think this fic is coming to an end you throw in a new twist that makes me go 'le gasp'! and keep reading! Fantastic!

ahahahhahaha -rofl-... i wasn't gonna review until i got to the end of the chapters that were up but i just had to stop reading to tell you that this is such a GREAT STORY!!! i love all of the humor and crack that you have mixed in with all of the seriousness. oh and so far, i LOVE this chapter (41) the best! you had me cracking up every few minutes. it's now way past midnight and i really hope that i haven't woken anybody up yet with all of my crazy laughing. if so, oh well. -grins- i especially love kurenai and asuma's relationship in this story. although they are not big, bad generals and warlords, kurenai and iruka can definitely command attention and be darn scary about things that need to be done. i just love this story. well off to read more... =^-^=

another great chapter (42). stupid kabuto and his fellow kakashi haters. they just don't know when to quit do they. hope nothing bad happens to iruka on his secret mission. oh and i was just wondering. when you wrote...
'He listened carefully as Kabuto gave him the name of his contact and their meeting place before heading back out of the tent, his original plan forgotten. Once outside he headed toward’s Raidou’s tent, confident that the general was the one person who could help him with this.
“Hello, General Sarutobi?” he called from outside the tent...'
did you mean to say General Namiashi?

i love how kakashi is taking asuma's brilliant 'yes dear' advice to heart.

OMFG... you can't possible leave us poor readers hanging like this!?!?! stupid raido. definitely not what a leader or a true lover would do. damn him. as much as i like the guy, he sooo deserves what's coming. damn him. i wonder who this new general is? as for the sleazy scumball, he bess keep his mitts, and other parts, off of genma if he knows what's good for him! -growls- and don't get me started on the ball-less kabuto and gang. -sighs and shakes head slowly- plz update soon and can you plz plz plz email me at kairna3@yahoo.com whenever you do update so i won't miss it plzzzzzz. i'll give you a freshly baked cyber-cookie if you do. i'm told they are very good. =^-^=

damn that was a fast update. not that im complaining or anything -grins- eeekkk! now jirjaiya and gai are also in the picture! i wonder who else is still loyal to kakashi. will they be enough to hold things up until help comes? i know this chapter just came up and all, but plz update soon and dont forget about the delicious promised cybercookie...=^-^=

Oh Gosh! Just when things seem to be winding down, you crank the knob one more time...or in this case, about 5 times. I can't wait to see what happens next. But in the meantime, I will be checking out your new story!

I guess I have to side with Kakashi on this one too...till I find out what the Generals are up to. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Poor, poor Kakashi! He took it better than I expected though. I just hate that he's lost his command. I thought his generals were better than that!