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I understand that fanfiction doesn't have to be realistic but it seems very stupid of Kabuto to tell the one person closest to Kakashi who the people are inside of his camp that are against him. Kakashi did what he did to Kabuto because of his involvement with Iruka so why would Kabuto tell Iruka about his allies in the camp expecially after he declares himself not a whore but a scrib in front of him.

Oh yes! That was wonderful! I've missed those two together. Thanks for the great update.

Lol I understand. And its more of we being raised amoung sticklers for detail than anything.And as Im familar with horses history and broken limbs (wince) it just popped out at me. I sincerely hope you didnt take it the wrong way, I honestly enjoy this story. The plot is fresh and inventive. I hope it lasts for many chapters to come.

lol this chapter was funny. asuma is so silly lol. and iruka is like a hurricane waiting to happen lmao.

Oh shit! Poor Kakashi...when it rains, it pours! Haha. I hope Iruka's not too hard on him, because I feel that Kabuto got what he deserved too. Hell, at least he's alive.

I really like this story and I'm sorry it took me so long to review. If it helps, reviewing is actually my resolution this year. I'm a big Kaka/Iru fan and you write this pairing very well. It's interesting to see the characters in different roles and their development has been great to follow.

I love this story. However, Im going to be picky and and seriously critique the last part of chapter 39.

As horse rider i can tell you right of that you're not supposed to even ride with a broken arm, much less a broken leg. And-if a leg is badly broken as you say Asuma's was- to risk a long ride only a a few weeks after the break would be very detrimental. Not only do you need both legs to ride and to stay on the horse and to give the horse direction, a horse ride would jar the healing bone and set back the mending process by weeks. The only way a person could ride a horse with a broken leg is in the most dire of cirumstances. And I would like to point out that Asuma could have had a messenger sent..A real general would because he would know that his troops needed him healed as quickly as possible.

Sry to be so picky. but otherwise you very much rock my socks. I love that youre doing this pairing (there arent enough kakairu stories in the world)
Hugs.

that was so nice of asuma to commandeer ... er... ah ... hitch a ride in the supply wagon and bring fresh provisions back to the camp along with badly needed medical supplies! that'll make it so much easier for ruka to carry kashi back!

i can't believe asuma's bored with his life of leisure already! at least kurenai was thinking and outfitted him properly before allowing him to leave.

that kashi's such a charmer. he got ruka to 'heal' him against ruka's better judgment! ^_^! ~and i guess rai wants to rip his eyes out! i mean ...just his luck! he catches them~ again!

that kashi! shameless! just shameless! will iruka exit the bathroom ever again? or will he die from total embarrassment?

Kashi: WTF?!guys! you interrupted my sexual healing!!!