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T_T This chapter was sad, but thanks for the update! =)

they're at war...

Kashi needed to address that awful event with rai! going into a combat situation, he needs people he can trust at his back. it still hurts, but had they not spoken, it would've become a major distraction at a very critical moment. their personal relationship is by no means repaired, but the 'professional' one is, and kashi missed his adviser. they'd been friends for years and rai was almost slain by that whore~ by poison meant for kashi. good men died, and having almost lost both rai and ruka to a conspiracy...well that gave kashi pause ... if he truly wanted rai dead~

HE'D BE DEAD!

period end of story!

it's a beginning to them healing...and as you can see, kashi transferred his wrath to kabuto, but rai got the message.

as for iruka being upset... kabuto would've raped him and had him whoring as a pleasure slave...a child saved by his scar. so it's a fitting fate for that bastard.
so... no, it's not too soon!

Really sweet update! I laughed at the thought of the baby pulling Asumas beard. Thanks for the update.

awwwwww, so sweet. :D

I don't like Kabuto but if Iruka knew what Kakashi had done to Kabuto, especially after suffering something similar tohis fate, I don't think Iruka would react well. As much as I love the friendship between Raidou and kakashi, I'm not sure this chapter was very believeable. A friend rapes a friend, can one honestly forgive such an action? I don't know. I think it would take an extraordinary person to forgive such a terrible thing, especially between soldiers. Trust is a very important part of a soldier's day to day life in the military. If they can't trust one of their team they wont go into battle with them. I guess in one part you have it right, kakashi still trusts Raidou but at the same time how can he? When that friend took advantage of his trust? Anyway, I think I'm starting to talk myself into circles. Another good chapter and it does show a bond bteween Kakashi and Raidou but Ithink its still rather early for things to go back to normal. But still a good story and a good read. I look forward to your next update. :D

Yay! I'm so glad Rai and Kakashi worked things out. I had almost forgot that they hadn't talked to each other since before the attack from the pleasure slave that almost killed Rai...and Kakashi is making sure Kabuto gets his isn't he...hahaha. I'm not sure I really want to know what all has been happening to him.

LOL, Kabuto the fuck-towel. That is some jacked-up Karma.

Awww, so cute. Loved how close they got. but why is iruka afraid of kakashi? Is it just what his mind told him when he was poisoned? Holy hell. The gen and Raidou part was smokin' hot. purrrr. After kakashi, Iruka and on the right day Itachi, Genma is my fav man. He's just so hot!!! And Genma and Raidou are just so good together. He's so pretty, raidou's so tough. Keep on keeping on. This story is great and i'm glad that i don't have to worry if they'll end up together anymore.
Cheers
Meg

this is one of the best stories ive read....CHIBI Sango loves sessha-san! however, 'tsugi-san found a small typo...u called genma a scribe and so sango was confused... and yes... sango has 3 personalities and is speaking in the thrid person.... but thats another story


that was hot!! please continue!!

*CHIBI Sango gives cookies as bribe*

Once again, you've outdone yourself! magnificent!

~anz~

ps: HAPPY NEW YEAR!