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by sesshabattousai

person satterb
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord!!! Genma makes an excellent seme. That was some of the sexiest shit I've read in a long time. Beautiful! Kakashi and Iruka are just too sad...please do something before my heart breaks.
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Sesshy! Good chapters. Really awesome stuff. Loved pregnant kurenai! I feel that if a woman is giving birth she should make her man feel completely inferior by her strength. Oh and she should also be violent and curse a blue streak. but for kurenai that was perfect. I was worried for a bit that Kakashi was pushing iruka to fast but he was a good boy so he gets a star for not being stupid. Will Iruka go with him? That's very soon for him to take off and he's got his new lands and stuff to deal with. Not that I don't want him to go. Great stuff. Can't wait for more, as always!
Cheers
Meg
person RyuEarth
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol gotta love genma! XD
Thanks for the update! ^^
person satterb
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh...I almost forgot about those two! It's good to see someone is getting some! I hope you finish that love scene in the next update...please pretty please?
person gaaraspussy
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's about time I finally give you the credit you so rightfully deserve. I've been so busy lately with school and stuff that I haven't updated in a very long time, but you've updated within two days since I've been reading this. I am so in love with this story, and I love the way you've developed the characters exactly as they would in the Ninjaverse. I'm glad there's finally someone to write an excellent AU that actually fits the characters personalities. I, for one, hate reviewing, being such a lazy person (lol), but I thought you had to know exactly how much I love this story, and the way it's coming along. Eh, I'm actually on break from school, and the blocks don't allow for me to get on here once I go back, so if it's not too much trouble, could you send me copies of each chapter? I'd totally love you forever! (email is sesshy_is_hot@hotmail.com) Thank you so much! Keep up the lovely works.
person RyuEarth
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
kakashi was so sweet in this chpater! thanks for the update!
person satterb
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There's just something about a man and a newborn baby....awwww! I loved this update. Thanks and have a Happy New Year!
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story....i love sessha-san....you are amazing....i wish i cud get a picture of kurenai's adorable baby....and kakashi and iruak are FINALLY together again.....

please update more soon

*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
person RyuEarth
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't remember the last time I updated ^^;
But this has been getting good! I loved chapter 27, all those men deserved it!
and I hope everybody will be ok! =)
person satterb
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just thought Iruka was about to take Kakashi back....dammit! Anyway...the update was sweet, I can't wait for the next update!