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by sesshabattousai

schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I wish I had as much time to work on mine as you have to work on yours. It's obvious that you are enjoying yourself.
person Raholea
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*falls off chair cheering head off*
damn, i know i haven't really reviewed much to this story, even though i've been following it faithfully. I'm so glad Iruka and kakashi will eventually get back together- cause i know they both need some time, but it's good to know 'Ruka is willing to make an attempt and not run away. and way to go merry couple, for the new baby. I know i wouldn't have done it without meds, lol. and Iruka as a midwife. O_O that's kinda cute, in an odd way. but since he's such good soul, it suits. anyways, i love the story nd looking forward to whatever you have left of this!!!
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow kurenai is a scary pregnant lady lol. when she calle dasuma an ass i almost choked lol. that was too funny. lol.
person RyuEarth
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! I wonder where Iruka learned how to help give birth o.0
but i loved it when Asuma passed out! XD that was priceless!
thanks for the update!
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this chapter is very harsh.
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent and funny! ha! Asuma faints, Kakashi's bones are nearly crushed. Wodnerful chapter! so funny! :D
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm liking this story so far! :)
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Seshy!!! Merry christmas! Wow! Good chapters. I felt sorry for hijaime when Kakashi killed him. It's not his fault that he was programed to be that way. Granted with that much programing there's no way it'd be safe to let him go. Plus he almost killed Raidou. Awww, poor Ruka. Does he think that Kakashi was the one who raped him? Is that what his delusions had shown him when he was poisoned? Really good stuff and I like how you're not rushing it along. Time is usually a good answer for this type of thing. Considering how different your idea is from mine I may write that Itairu story that i wanted to eventually. Gods i have so many stories to catch up on first though. I'm working diligently on a couple right now and of course my RP. Anywho, I should get back to it but i just wanted to let you know what a bitchen job you're doing. You have a great take on this pairing (kakairu forever!!).
Cheers
Meg (ReixGaara)
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude.....while CHIBI Sango loves what you've done to those traitorous bastards....i cant help but feel anxious about kakashi. if even asuma is having second thouhts...or simply hesitating at sharing a tent with kakashi....this wont look too good for the warlord, will it? and what ever happened to iruka? when will he get better? i wanna know!
update soon please

*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
person satterb
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Don't mess with Kakashi! I do hope that Raidou and Kakashi can be friends again though...thanks for the great update! I hate to see this story coming to a close. I hope that after this one is over you have something else planned in that brilliant head of yours!