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I busted out laughing at Itachi's part. Great story :)

oh that was very fun. I like the character personalities portrayed. I wish you would have fleshed out the scene that caused the punishment a little more just so we could have gotten a feel for why he was going through this (and perhaps giggle at it) but still the end result was very enjoyable.

One note of criticism. That was not a flogger, or you wanted to use a flogger but described it inaccurately. What you described was a cane. Perhaps not many would really know the difference, but I do (personally) so it ripped me out of the flow briefly. A flogger wouldn't sting or crack like that (but a cane does) and is also made of many strands, usually leather. I would suggest just changing the word.

Other than that, one of my favorites.

OH MY GOD! Words cannot describe. That was soooo hot. Naru/Sasu beats Sasu/Naru any day. And I'd just like to say "He was approaching the moment of no secrets" was the best line EVER! Don't get me started on the picture part...thanks for making my night =]

I loved it! Interesting idea. You go Naruto, embarrass our pretty little Sasuke. The Itachi bit amused the heck outta me. I'd love to see some afterlife romping. XD

*evil laughter* First hit, first review: the cherry's MINE!!! *devours*

Love it, love it, love it! AND IT'S FOR MEEEEE!!! *fangirl squeal*

I look forward to returning the favor!

P.S. I love Itachi's thoughts on the matter. You rock.

I love BDSM, only when Naruto's doing it to Sasuke, not the other way around. I won't read it, if it's the other way around. Great story!!!^^ Muahahahahaha!!! That's what you get, you son of a bitch!!!^^ Go Naruto!!!^^

OMG, i love it when Naruto is being all commanding and stuff, even without Kyuu's influence. And what evilness! that was awesome!!

Now i wanna steal that Sasuke, and hand him over to Itachi so Nii-san can make sure he never disrespects anyone again. *snickers*

That was hot...but I wonder why did Sasuke just ram into the room like that? What did he want from Naruto to being with. I mean it hardly matters now, but the punishment was rather hot. Great job dear!
Oh! also I believe you reviewed for my story to woo a prince. In answer to your question. Naruto is a vampire dear.
Thanks for reading and reviewing my story.