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April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That ending was rich; Kakashi would be the one to let something embarrasing like that happen not have it affect him in the slightest. I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eyaaay!
You know what I love? I love love the fact that they haven't kissed yet ^__^ And that they got SOOO CLOSE. ah ha ha ha, Kakashi making Sasuke taste himself... *dies* That whole section there, the mental images had me all tinglyyyy! And they way they talked to each other, when they actually started...
And, I don't know if you intended it to be this way, but the I can feel it/I can feel it too/Make me feel it more part - my inner romantic had a hunch that they meant a little more than just the feeling of the cock in the ass XD But I might be wrong!
And I really liked the bit where Kakashi shut Sasuke up, and Sasuke knew he did it on purpose, and he was glad, but Kakashi kind of acknowledged it anyway. Even though Kakshi won't quite acknowledge the inner workings of his own mind XD That retard!
You know what I love? I love love the fact that they haven't kissed yet ^__^ And that they got SOOO CLOSE. ah ha ha ha, Kakashi making Sasuke taste himself... *dies* That whole section there, the mental images had me all tinglyyyy! And they way they talked to each other, when they actually started...
And, I don't know if you intended it to be this way, but the I can feel it/I can feel it too/Make me feel it more part - my inner romantic had a hunch that they meant a little more than just the feeling of the cock in the ass XD But I might be wrong!
And I really liked the bit where Kakashi shut Sasuke up, and Sasuke knew he did it on purpose, and he was glad, but Kakashi kind of acknowledged it anyway. Even though Kakshi won't quite acknowledge the inner workings of his own mind XD That retard!
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cheers wildly*
I love what you're doing here ^__^ Your characterizations make me so happy!
Lemme see, I had a mental list of things I really liked while I was reading, I'm going to try to remember them all. Ah - the part where Kakashi told him to crawl, and Sasuke's thoughts about that - there was that one line, Kakashi was askng for submission, but Sasuke wasn't looking to be dominated - and then he liked the thought of it anyway ^^ That's so perfect! Ah ha ha, and the part about the underwear... tricky, tricky Kakashi XD (ANd now, whenever I see Kakashi in the manga or anime, I'll be picturing him going commando ;) Thanks for that!)
I really like the constantly-shifting dynamic you've given them - it is delicious! Aaaand the bj, yeah... YUM. OH, and Sasuke's deliberate, manipulative use of sensei - I love that.
AND - the part when Kakashi realized it wasn't jsut a mission, it was personal - that made me all starry-eyed XD When it comes to these guys, I love a little bit of genuine emotion mixed in with the mindgames and the banter and the pretending-not-to-be-affected and the sex.
Yes, this chapter was great! I look forward to more!
I love what you're doing here ^__^ Your characterizations make me so happy!
Lemme see, I had a mental list of things I really liked while I was reading, I'm going to try to remember them all. Ah - the part where Kakashi told him to crawl, and Sasuke's thoughts about that - there was that one line, Kakashi was askng for submission, but Sasuke wasn't looking to be dominated - and then he liked the thought of it anyway ^^ That's so perfect! Ah ha ha, and the part about the underwear... tricky, tricky Kakashi XD (ANd now, whenever I see Kakashi in the manga or anime, I'll be picturing him going commando ;) Thanks for that!)
I really like the constantly-shifting dynamic you've given them - it is delicious! Aaaand the bj, yeah... YUM. OH, and Sasuke's deliberate, manipulative use of sensei - I love that.
AND - the part when Kakashi realized it wasn't jsut a mission, it was personal - that made me all starry-eyed XD When it comes to these guys, I love a little bit of genuine emotion mixed in with the mindgames and the banter and the pretending-not-to-be-affected and the sex.
Yes, this chapter was great! I look forward to more!
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you in ways even I don't fully understand yet!!!!!!!!
it makes me LOL that Kakashi's bathroom is just like mine XD [aside from the fact mine has partialy ripped off fish wallpaper]
it makes me LOL that Kakashi's bathroom is just like mine XD [aside from the fact mine has partialy ripped off fish wallpaper]
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^__^ Sasuke wearing Kakashi's clothes is just adorable. I like how Sasuke bosses Kakashi around a little bit, too ^^
ha ha, the book thing made me grin! ^^; I am failing at leaving a coherent review, but I really did enjoy this chapter, and I look forward to more!
Oh, and god, I hate deleting reviews :( I've accidentally done it a few times, and it sucks.
ha ha, the book thing made me grin! ^^; I am failing at leaving a coherent review, but I really did enjoy this chapter, and I look forward to more!
Oh, and god, I hate deleting reviews :( I've accidentally done it a few times, and it sucks.
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry, I'm not disappointed ;) I liked this chapter a lot !
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. The details you put in there are what really make a good lemon. Feel free to update any time you desire.
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm enjoying the hell out of this!
^__^ Hee, I enjoyed the beginning... I liked seeing Sasuke's thoughts on Orochimaru and Kabuto, very cool ^^ I did like Sasuke's disguise, and Kakashi's surprise at seeing him. And the almost-kiss... god, i love tension like that! oh ho HO, Sasuke's having fantasies now, is he? Mmm, him getting off in the shower, oh the mental images!
Hr hr hr, Kakashi's got quite a surprise waiting for him when he gets home, looks like :D
I look forward to reading more!
^__^ Hee, I enjoyed the beginning... I liked seeing Sasuke's thoughts on Orochimaru and Kabuto, very cool ^^ I did like Sasuke's disguise, and Kakashi's surprise at seeing him. And the almost-kiss... god, i love tension like that! oh ho HO, Sasuke's having fantasies now, is he? Mmm, him getting off in the shower, oh the mental images!
Hr hr hr, Kakashi's got quite a surprise waiting for him when he gets home, looks like :D
I look forward to reading more!
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. I loved the scarecrow part as well, very amusing and easily pictured as a Naruto thing to do. Please update again when you have the opportunity to do so.
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story, and well written ^^ Sasuke really is obssessed with Kakashi... Is he really gonna rape poor Kakashi ? (I would love that lol, Sasuke using force on Kakashi turns me on somehow)
Good work ! I look forward to reading the next chapter !
Good work ! I look forward to reading the next chapter !