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for The First Time

by ShinobiGoneWild

person HyperBlueKitten
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn. This... I was so into this. Deadly, twisted, and errotic.... Great job! ^~^
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was nice. lol at gemna just showing up lol he has great timing lol ^_^
person xxxx
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this so much. I wish there were more stories where Kakashi actually felt bad for what he was doing and both of them being crazy and such <3 I think this writing style was much more effective then if you were to have written it all out. I really enjoyed it!
person Sylvir
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was violent and disturbing and wonderful.
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh~ very different (in a good way). Really made me feel for them because the POV was so believable, and the actions and thoughts for the characters.
person MewMew2
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dark but strangely appropriate. Excellent job on expressing just how easy it is to fall into that pattern of thought and obsession once you start. Thank you for writing this, it is a wonderful piece of work.
person qwerty
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. And kinda creepy. But good.