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for Stuck in the Between

by lexjamandme

person -xyz-
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am crying.
Darn it I am really crying.
This is soooo beautiful. THANK you. It was a treasure reading this.
person lo
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am impressed. This was a wonderfully written piece. I wish I could put this into better words but this was just so good. The way you slowly built up this picture to tell the stories of these two. Great work.
person asm613
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing and sharing such a beautiful story. This is one of the most emotionally satisfying Sasu/Naru stories I've read in the longest time. What a brilliant idea_ and you told the story so wonderfully. There were too many parts I loved to mention them all. But this is the first moment in time I read about that moved me: (((“Naruto, I…” Sasuke began but words and emotions tumbled inside his heart and mind, screaming to be free but unable to escape and Sasuke felt tears prickle at the back of his eyes.
And then Naruto smiled and he placed his own hands over Sasuke’s on his cheeks and said, “I know.”))). And the ending was just too adorable_the toddler and 'mine' part of the story was a great way to end/begin the story again. Thanks for writing a story that made me cry happy tears_there aren't many that do that__and happy tears are so much more satisfying than sad tears.

person gilliath
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! God how adorable!
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love your view of the afterlife and judging area. Very creative. That was a fantastic story and while I didn't really get hot and bothered over it I was deeply touched by the emotional rollercoaster.
person Leeana69
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope your happy. I read this before I left for work and now I have to redo ALL my makeup cause I was bawling.

:shakes angry fist:

Beautiful story, not many fics can actually touch my heart of ice cold steeeeel. >.<
But yours did.
person Death-Chan
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sequel please!!! I would so just love seeing them growing up togther and how Sasuke reacts to others trying to get to his "Mine". Also how there pairents would react to Sasuke's new "Mine". This was the best and it made me cry with how sweet it is. I would just like a sequel even if its only a oneshot.

Loving every word
D-chan
person digiditz
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting story. It was kind of sad in a way to see how their life could have played out if only they had meet. But the ending was adorable and made up for that brief bitter sweet moment. If I ever get a golden stuffed fox I'm naming it Mine.
person Rai
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really beautiful. Thank you for writing this, it actually made me feel better. Thank you so much.
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Read this while listening to 'Save me from myself' by Christina Aguilera. It melts into the story.

This was touching.