rate_review Reviews

I love this story of yours, from beginning to end(which I wish wasn't the end XD).

I love your writing so much. Ahh this story almost had me in tears....seriously. That you can bring out such emotion is so.....I donno, so captivating. >.<;

I wish I could tell you more, or that I can stop being such a lurker, or that I could do something to make you smile a little.

Much love~

Beautiful....

You always manage to amaze me. Just when I think I know you and your writing you pull something totally amazing out and blow me away. Thanks for all you do. kisses Slave

This is hands down the best thing I have read in a long time.

Holy shit that was....mind-blowing. Utterly mind-blowing.

I am completely speechless. I haven't read a one shot like this in so long. It made me cry and stare in wonder. The whole theme of heaven and hell and the inbetween was fantastic. The descriptions of the courthouse and their meeting were beautiful. My eyes were glued to every word the first second I started reading. When they said they missed eachother in this lifetime, everything clicked into place and it was just so perfect. The memories were so amazingly written.

And I LOVED, positively LOVED the ending. It made me cry.

Perfection. That's all I can say.

I never thought you could so thoroughly outdo yourself, but you did. I'm crying, actually crying from how freaking beautiful that was. I can't even think of all the things I loved about it without just saying 'everything' and I thought I was a tough critic.

If you ever want to give us toothaches from the sweetness, do a sequel to this. Please. I can just imagine how perturbed their parents would be.

Thank you for sharing that with us.

You know, I would probably like this story a lot more if I KNEW WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED. I mean, I get it. Just, I was too confused for the majority of the story to really enjoy it...I think the story would have been better if Sasuke and Naruto dying in real life was first? I don't know?

Yeah, okay, my review sounds pretty ignorant. I mean, I got the story, I just, hm, it didn't do anything for me? I wanted it too? But, hm, this perplexes me.

As ridiculous as this sounds, I almost cried at the part where Naruto said he'd never finished reading the last Harry Potter. A good friend of mine who was really into the Harry Potter series died before the last book came out. I always wonder if somehow he got to find out the end.

Anyway, this was a really, really great story. I was kind of like "Wtf?" at the beginning, but reaching the end I was smiling widely and joyfully. Very interesting touch of Hinduism and Monotheistic beliefs mixed into the story.

I also loved the part at the end with Sasuke's "Mine!" Hehehe. ^_~

~ Jelp

Holy cow. That was a GREAT story. I really really enjoyed it. I have read many stories here on AFF, and this is the First one that reduced me to tears. If there was a way to favorite this story, I would do so in a heart beat. Is there gonna be a sequel? OH I hope so. I would like to see their outcome as they grow older.