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by sameyler

schedule December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this!!! All 3 of them being shocked when they saw Naruto was hilarious and the chemistry between Sasuke and Naruto was reeeeaally really good!
person monrque
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story I would love to see more
person sabrina
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very sexy
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I LOVED IT!! You just CAN'T end it here!! It needs more, it's calling out for a longer more in depth look at their new lives and them falling in love maybe his new kitsune getting pregnant mmmmm the possibilities are endless!! Please don't leave me to imagine them on my own!! Great work and keep it up!!
person Sailor Kismet
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what happens to Naruto once he has his ramen? ^-^ Does he become seme?
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaa!! how cute!
i loved this one shot. it was awesome, and i liked how Naruto always said "master", it sorta reminded me of some short guy with a hump on his back! lol
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay I liked this story. So what about the others please continue with them I really really like them.
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really cute, if a little abrupt. I'd say your biggest problem is that there aren't nearly enough periods, or even commas. Yeah, other than the serious run-on-sentence problem, it wasn't bad.