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for to break again

by sangohoushi

person jgoodman
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story, please update soon
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well that took the pride of 3 males and shot it down lol nicely done i like it
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow neji fell hard and fast for gaara :/ So strange to picture Sasuke in that subtle tone. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
geez those guys are idiots if they don't know the signs of being pregnat!
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please tell me there is more to this tale as i happen to love it

also i am a vicum of rape myself and can conect with Naruto about that its a hard thing to get over tho mine was not violent it still haunts me to this day its been over 15 years now and that wound has not gone away it may never go away tho i prey every day that it will
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES! they had sex *victory-dance*!
It's a good way to erase bad memories of sex, to have sex with someone you love and trust 100%.
Looking forward to Gaara & Neji sex-fest!
AND looking forward to explanations & flashbacks.
Be careful of not making Sasuke seem too mushy and soft..

Thank you so so much for the chapter! :D
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay, just take your time i'm in no hurry i've been busy lately anyway.
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The plot is so original and thought out. Did I mention suspenseful? I like how you made Kyuubi a separate person and how his violent past with Naruto--not really reflects but is kind of similar to what happened with Sasuke and Itachi in the anime/manga. Love the whole Gaara/Neji pairing there. I can't wait to see what Naruto has in store for Sasuke next. :)
person Call me Teme
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Slavery should so be legal.

Very nice btw, Gaara and Neji huh? -gets VERY nice mental images- I like the way you think!
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cool chappies!!! i'll give CHBI ena chocolate choco-chip cookie if they fuck in the next chapter