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for to break again

by sangohoushi

schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol@ neji. he really seems self conscious.

why would we kill u? an update is better than no update at all^_^
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good update and happy new year!
person Onikage
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Gives you a Nightlight to magicaly protect you from Scary reveiwers, and mopre batches of Cookies for the Chibi.*

Great chapter!! Keep them coming!!
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"here take your cookies they ain't drugged." Humph, good chappie though.
person Onikage
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*As the masses flee from Chibi Sango, Onikage rushes out with two cookie trays of freshly baked chocolate chip cookies to save the day. She offers them carefully..*

*She then pulls out her cell phone.* Hello, Proffessor_Sibly?... I think we're going to need the Cookie truck soon..
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! I can just picture a pregent Lee! ALOL!
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was great!!! i loved it.and couldn't ask for anything better.keep it up. you really got me hooked.
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Heeeerrre Chibi!!!! cookieeesss!!!!!" (*cookies have sleeping potionin side them, shhhhh! chibi doesn't know and will be out like a elephant for the next several chappies*)
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!!!!!!!!no!you left me hanging i gotta know what the big secret is.my guess is that naruto is a girl or i don't know!damn you for writing such a good story!please lets us know -__-
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i wanna know too! and here's your damn cookies now let the authoress go! LOL