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for to break again

by sangohoushi

person Onikage
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Holds out a box of Holiday and Chocolate-chip cookies in a Police-exchange like manner..*

It's ok, Chibi Sango.. I have the cookies.. now release the next chapter..

You don't really want to hurt the next chapter, do you?...
person animelover
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the way you use suspense ... was actually breathless while the boys were coming up with plans to keep naru safe. whew!

good job!
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool chapters and here's your chocolate chip cookies for Chibi Sango! :)
person satterb
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far...really enjoyed the updates. Can't wait to see where this goes.
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, we want more! When I looked at the surrumy I first thought it was going be a dark ItaSasu fic, but I'm happy know its not and instead its a dark KyuuNaru fic.
person satterb
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far. Yes, I would love to see where you go with this...tho I don't understand why Neji would say what he did if Naruto's brother was a murderer and ruined Naruto's life. Please update soon...
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING!