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waouh i love your story i think AU story ae very good and yours is very interessing.

well crafted and amazing details and sensitivity to the subjectmatter. I love this story. you're doing such an amazing job. :D

Hiyee~! Let me start off first by saying you are kickass at writing summaries. I was browsing, trying to find new material to use for procrastination purposes and was stunned at how awesome this fic sounded. So yes, major props to you.

I'm not sure if you noticed, but in the second chapter, near the end Naruto asks where Sasuke is by name, but previously Sasuke never introduced himself. I had to go back and re-read their interactions to make sure I hadn't missed it.

I really really love what you are doing with this fic. Naruto is so precious, i wanna adopt and cuddle him myself! I nearly skipped for joy when i read the first few lines describing the other passenger on the train. I hadn't expected Sasuke to be in this fic, or at least not show up so soon, but it made me estatic! He didn't say much, but how he said some of the things he did leads me to believe he'll be playing a pretty important role in this fic.

Hugs and kisses to you, you should have far more than only just over 700 hits. You're freaking amazing. I plan on reading any other fics you've got up, but seeing how its alread almost 12am, and i have to work tomorrow AND turn in a short story that i've yet to fully edit... I'll have to delay my fun til later.

Anywho, I'mma stop chatting off your ear =) I Love this fic and plan on seein it through to the end. Update soon~! XOXOX

Sincerely Yours,
~Kei-Chan

Im loving this, please update soon and keep up the good work

This is so wonderfully written. When you speak of his lack of development I feel a tug at my heart. This is just wonderful you are truly making this story speak.

Wow. This story is brilliant. I'm so impressed.

Keep up the great work! ^^

This was so cute! I liked the way Sasuke acted on the train and 'guarding' Naruto for a bit! ^^
And I love that you do take the time to descirbe everything! lots of stories i read leave that out and it's depressing because i feel like there's a piece of the story missing! =/
Anyway, I love the way Iruka and Kakashi interact with eachother, they act very well/insynce with eachother and it makes me smile! I also love the way that they interact around Naruto, very protective and loving! I hope things work out in the legal system and that they can take Naruto in!
Thanks for the update! XD

Wpw this is getting more and mmore interesting! I never though naruto would be sasuke so soon, but I think it was really good! And now you just got me more curius! I hope you can write again soon!

You can't leave us hanging. This is very intriguing.I can't wait to see more. So far the characters you are creating within these characters are very interesting and are really coming to life. Great job
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oh i loved this chap. kakashi is such a good father figure. that sasuke is so blunt lol. hope to find out more about him.