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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that you are a Kay Scarpetta fan!!!!!! Patricia Cornwell is one of my favorites!
This chapter was beautiful, I think the way you're writting both Kakashi and Iruka is perfect!!
I hope you keep it coming because I can't get enough. I hate when I get to the end!!! I need more.
I can't wait to see how you work Sasuke further into this story.
This chapter was beautiful, I think the way you're writting both Kakashi and Iruka is perfect!!
I hope you keep it coming because I can't get enough. I hate when I get to the end!!! I need more.
I can't wait to see how you work Sasuke further into this story.
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fantastic. very realistic. a very intense story, very moving and fascinating. look forward to the next update. :D
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I really like the whole thing! And I am really curius as to how exactly you will continue it , because I wanna know more about what naru knows and doesn't know and how kakashiand iruka deal withit...
I hope you update soon!
I hope you update soon!
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...a near blind naruto who were kidnapped at six years old and yet his parents moved on with their lives while naruto went thru god knows what? that's just cruel and yet makes me want to know more about what kakashi and iruka will do for him and if the so called parents will come back into his life or not.
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like it is going to be so depressing, but i am completely loving this!
I'm going to be looking forward to reading the next chapter! =)
I'm going to be looking forward to reading the next chapter! =)
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! I'm already addicted to your story.
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!
I can't even stress how WOW that was!
I can't wait to read more, this will most certanly be come a favorite!
I can't even stress how WOW that was!
I can't wait to read more, this will most certanly be come a favorite!
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was great! I really like how complex the characters are and how it deals with topics that not a lot of people talk about. I would just say to watch out for over-explaining things. Its a very minor thing, but its somthing that will give the story a better flow. God I want to see what happens, I can't wait! ^_^
btw, there is a song that I'm playing in band called 'Watchmen, Tell us of the Night' that is about overcomming the memories of an abusive childhood. It's really pretty.
"Peace sells...but who's buying?"
btw, there is a song that I'm playing in band called 'Watchmen, Tell us of the Night' that is about overcomming the memories of an abusive childhood. It's really pretty.
"Peace sells...but who's buying?"
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Job well done! Got me hooked within 2 paragraphs! Writing style is fantastic, solid work on composition, great plotwork. Hope to see a lot more soon!
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods, this is incredible. I so want to read more! I love the slow development, introduction of characters. Very rich narrative!