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Love this fic. The plot is great, the characters portrayed are captivating, and the changes in POV are absolutely fascinating. Well done. I eagerly look forward to more.

Noooooooooo! More.... I need more!!!! The funny thing is that I actually said "nooooooooooo" out loud and my 11yr. old looked at me as if I was insane for talking to the computer!! :)

I am officially in love with your writing style. You make everything absolutely perfect, I don't see any flaws in the plot. Simply beautiful. I hope you'll post sooner this time (from what I grasped, you didn't update for a year,ne?) If there is anything particular that I would point out and make a comment, that would be Naruto's current condition- I was thinking, is the blonde aware that carrying will be dangerous without someone else beside him? I'm asking myself if he planned something concerning that... And the newest situation he found himself in, of course- I mean Itachi found him. The first thing I could think of was that he would do somthing to the blonde that would make him miscarry, so I'm kind of afraid for Naruto since his shakra resources are limited and low...

Wow... this was an essay. Well, to cut long story short- I really hope you'll update soon, I'm very intrigued...

I have been looking for this story forever! I love it and I'm happy to see that you are back at it again. I am really interested to see what happens. Especially because Itachi has come back on the scene. I'm also crious as to what he is going to do and if Sasuke will be able to reisist Orochimaru when the times comes. I'm the edge of my seat...update soon!

Continue please. I need to known if Naruto keep the baby and what's going to happen to him when if he does keep the baby.

I love this story. Your Naruto is majorly tragic as the situation. This chapter was beautiful. It was so easy to go through all of the emotions presented in this chapter: anger, jealousy, confusion, heartache, etc.

The plot here.. WOW! My thoughts were the same as Naruto's. What was Sasuke thinking? It is a bit selfish but I know that there is so much more. There is so much that I could comment on, but it's too much.

I await the next chapter and how this will pan out.

Wow What a story !! It is really awesome!!!
I can't wait to read more!

Its way too soon for Naruto to already feel a baby bump. Even a tiny smidge of one. Unless, of course, this is one of those funky express pregnancies.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS FIC. I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT. I HATE THE COUNCIL!!! I HAVEN'T REALLY READ MUCH OF NARUTO AND THE EPISODES I WATCHED I NEVER GLEANED MUCH ABOUT THE TWO OLD PEOPLE SO I DON'T KNOW WHAT THEY ARE REALLY LIKE. IF THEY ARE ANYTHING LIKE IN THIS FIC, THEN SARUTOBI WAS MISPLACED IN HIS FORMER TEAM CUZ HE DIDN'T SEEM SO BIGOTED AT ALL. ANYWAYS, GREAT JOB AND PLEASE CONTINUE.