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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I just want to hug Naruto at this point. I feel so bad for him, having to go through this all alone.
I want to be upset with Sasuke, but I understand what he is trying to do.
Hopefully everything will go smoothly, for both Sasuke and Naruto.
Great chapter, update soon.
-Akiru-
I want to be upset with Sasuke, but I understand what he is trying to do.
Hopefully everything will go smoothly, for both Sasuke and Naruto.
Great chapter, update soon.
-Akiru-
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really think you've got a good story going here and I hope you will continue it till the end. until next chapter, tata for now!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such an amazing fic. I've read many Naruto mrpeg stories, but this one is by far the best. The plot is amazing and rarely have I seen Sasuke done in such a way. Many make him too broody or too emotional. You have captured the passion of Sasuke here as well as Naruto. I cannot wait to see his reaction when he wakes up!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad *sniff*
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a twist! Kind of sad but really good. Can't wait to see how Naruto reacts.
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, very nice and um.. angsty... sad... yeah. Please add more soon.
Thank you
Slave
Thank you
Slave
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Since I'm a lazy lazy lazy girl you get the same review here as on FF.Net. I just wanted to let you know that I really do afore this story!!!
Absolutely wonderful story! I love how thought out and well written it is, it makes it a pure joy to read. Your characterizations are also wonderful and alive.
I'm hurting with both Sasuke and Naruto, I understand why Sasuke feels that he has to leave. An Uchiha that's not in total control of himself must be a very frustrated and unhappy Uchiha.
What will Naruto do when he wakes up and Sasuke is gone but he has his baby growing inside him? His urge must be to follow his teme but can he really risk the baby? What will Sakura do when she finds out that Naruto is carrying Sasuke's child? She's already so bitter and this might push her over the edge.
Thank you so much for an amazing story, I can't wait to read more!
Absolutely wonderful story! I love how thought out and well written it is, it makes it a pure joy to read. Your characterizations are also wonderful and alive.
I'm hurting with both Sasuke and Naruto, I understand why Sasuke feels that he has to leave. An Uchiha that's not in total control of himself must be a very frustrated and unhappy Uchiha.
What will Naruto do when he wakes up and Sasuke is gone but he has his baby growing inside him? His urge must be to follow his teme but can he really risk the baby? What will Sakura do when she finds out that Naruto is carrying Sasuke's child? She's already so bitter and this might push her over the edge.
Thank you so much for an amazing story, I can't wait to read more!
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I have to say you have got me hooked. I like how you rewrote the plot for this story. Hell I have to say I would have like your version to happen instead of what is happening now.
All in all great first two chapters... can't wait for the next and Naruto's reaction to all of this.
-Akiru-
All in all great first two chapters... can't wait for the next and Naruto's reaction to all of this.
-Akiru-
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com