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for Sacrificial Beauty

by tillean

person Alpine02
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read this fic months ago and loved it... Well, I read it again... and love it more.. I really hope people aren't complaining about tardy updates...That is just lame and if people complain, they can not say they are true fans of good pieces of fan fic... I am always willing to wait for a great story... SO you just take your time and post when your darn well good and ready and I will be waiting with bells on for the next chappy..

Huggles
Alpine ^_^
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and hope to see an update soon!
person OJ
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update soon plz. It is going really well but I think they should find the people their after soon.
person Faefae
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really like this story! I found it by accident and I'm now addicted to Sakura/Kakashi stories. ^_^ Please write more soon! The steamy parts are so good! And I love Sakura having to hold back to act like Saki. Poor thing. I would have bopped him for the drool right away. The gropinbg would have been enjoyed though. ^_~
I'll try to review each chapter as you update! Keep up the good work.

Fae
person chocmilk
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hooray for update! i really liked it and look forward to more!
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg wow this was a great story! ^_^
i just finished reading the whole thing through and i gotta say..
from a plot standpoint, continuing on and writing about the mission should prove to be an intresting endeavour, a little risky though, but if you choose to, im all for it :D...
...that being said, leaving the story hear would also be a great idea cuz it lets the readrers use their own imagination in a sense
i know those kind of endings piss people off sometimes, but id consider this story an exception!
all in all, you certainly have a way with words, and you captired the character's personalities quite well!
KEEP WRITING YOUR AWESOME!! <3
person Mary
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was very well done, I hope to read more soon! I especially like that you combine smut with plot and it works flawlessly. Keep up the good work!
person chocmilkchan
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoo-hoo! another awesome kaka/saku fic joins the ranks. I really like your writing style, and I will be checking all the time for that New Chapter button. Update soon!
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your concept. Cant wait to see where the story goes. Good Work :P
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was more than I'd hoped for! At first -before reading- I was a bit iffy on the idea, but now that I have, I am terribly ecstatic that I went through with it!

Lately I have found that a lot of good authors have stopped writing, and when I read this I was relieved to find a new author whom has talent, great imagination and a creative mind that rivals my own. (Ego booster)

In all seriousness I would be honoured to edit your work! I am Canadian so I might spell things a bit differently, but its not all that hard to switch to American English! Your work is really good and it stands on its own! You don't really need me, I mean a beta. *looks both ways*
Besides I need the practice with the line of work I am hoping to get accepted into!

Good luck,
Have a great New Year!