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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so Sad! I loved it but it was sad bravo!
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg its been so long i think i read this chapter already but maybe i didnt lol. Damn is it Shika trying to set up Sasuke cuz he thinks he isnt as close to Naruto as Sasuke is?
I still cant fathom who the hell it is unless its obviously Sasuke lol. This was really a great mystery that had me on pins and needles the whole time which is how i like it :))
I hope u do another mystery like this one. That would be so cool!!XD
I still cant fathom who the hell it is unless its obviously Sasuke lol. This was really a great mystery that had me on pins and needles the whole time which is how i like it :))
I hope u do another mystery like this one. That would be so cool!!XD
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOOO!!! Got it in 2 deaths and a weird conversation. ^__^ Now I only wish I'd found this story earlier so I could have guessed and possibly saved Naruto soo much pain. *sigh* I really hate seeing Naru in soo much pain. ;_; But great story. You did really well with the subtly hints and body actions throughout to make it a good mystery. Tho , you made it a little to blatent that the masked figure in the kitchen was Sai with Shika and cemented my knowledge. The MO was too forced and unlike the original killer. And then the sheer hatred that went into Sai's death... yeah a "dead" give away lol.
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should so do an alternate ending! This story begs for one!
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story! I loved it. I wish that Naruto wouldn't have been viewed as a killer. That he was still considered a monster in the end made me sad! But I loved the way you wrote Shikamaru. Maybe you could do an alternate ending? =^-^= Please?
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my a demented shika. who would have thought lol. thank you for giving me closure. but i would at least have liked lee to know that naru didn't commit all of those murders.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think we are all forgetting one certain person...Lee
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! So did Sasuke really do it? I guess it's evident now. Unless, Shikamaru is just framing Sasuke. Maybe the 2 of them are trying to drive Naruto crazy. Ok, I'm going off the deep end on that on.:) This has been such an amazingly different fic and I just love it!!!!!!!!!!
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uwaaaa this is gooood! The suspense is KILLING me. Please, please, update if for the sake of my sanity if nothing else!!! Oh, and I knew who the killer was since chapter...eh...four? After Kiba's death, whatever. Naruto is gonna cryyy...
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FYI...you may want to redo the summary for this. No offense, but it's a little...substandard compared to your actual fic...Don't hurt me?