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for The Game Plan

by Adi

schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliantly funny, and a touch bittersweet. I love it! ^_^
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story. So well written, and the humor - well, I just loved the idea of Naruto giving Mr Peterson some "physical time with his wife". Snorted out loud at that one. Thanks for putting a big smile on my face!
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schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This... was pure gold!

There are no many lines in this that had been doubled over laughing that I don't have time to even mention them. The story was well-written, hilarious and just freakin' great!

Loved your Naruto. 83 His plans are always the best ones.

Little Kakashi notes were funny as and very cute. XD

And I'll leave it at that before I begin some late-night happy ranting.
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was so funny, so great.
Loved it!
Happy holidays!
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SO MUCH LOVE!!!

Hee hee, oh Adi, your Naruto never fails to amaze and amuse me <3!!
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Adi, where have you been, lady?!

Good to see you back and bearing gifts. Great stuff!