rate_review Reviews

My goodness, Naruto sure is a hard person to track down when he runs away and I just love how persistent Itachi was in finding him.

I really can't blame Ino's reaction for being dazed by Itachi's beauty when he visted the Sshelter, and it was a nice line he used to let her down. Hmm, Sakura was oddly protective of her, that is interesting.

For a second, I was becoming really scared of who Naruto ran into and I'm relieved its just Sasuke and who would've tought Ita would have called his brother there then and there! Naruto's been found out there and then...I could just imagine his face!

Now I really look forward to the confrontations, reactions and the whys and the trio's part, especially on Itachi's and Naruto's part!

As always a wonderful job you have done, Dominate, I can't wait for your next instalment!

-hugggggles-
~Cas

Foremost, I'm so glad you have gotten a Beta! - squeals & thanks ItaNaruLover-

I really enjoyed the banter and the comebacks between the two, Naruto is witty and such a cute rebel!

We got get some insights as to why Itachi doesn't like his family, can't blame him!

There is no wonder why Naruto didn't like the shelters, it had a depressing atmosphere indeed but being in each other's company made it bearable, and Naruto considered Itachi a friend all ready =D

I love the subtleties - Itachi not wanting to wake Naruto even though he was drooling on shirt and the hair ruffling was such an affectionate way of waking! I like it, no I adore it! He trust's him enough to take him to a friend's house!

Short memory Naruto..you did the head thing you promised not too! -grins-

Kudos, for all the ItaNaru goodness, Dominate, thank you!

~Cas

This is a really cute story so far and a bit different from most of the plots that i have read. I like this...i'm glad i did the random clicking thing today. Happy Writing!!!

Wow! Itachi was hard on naruto!! I hope he doesn't do anything crazy because he is hurt, or that if he does itachi can save him in time!
I can't wait to find out what will happen!!!!

OMG!!! How could naruto say that!!! ahahah I can't wait to know how kisame reacted to thaat!!!

Haha.. awesome. ^^

Naruto always gives people wacky nicknames. My all time favorite, by far, was when he dubbed Zetsu from Akatsuke "Aloe Vera." ^^
Keep up the good work!

I am SO happy that you have the first chappie up, and of course I'm salivating while waiting for the others =D

I can't wait to see how their relationship develops, especially with Naruto being a little rebel and all - also to find out why he is seemingly familiar to Itachi.

Thank you so much dear, very intrigued over here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Cas

Yay, an ItaNaru fic!! I love it!!
It's an interesting story and I can't wait to read more.
Although, as you said yourself, you could need a beta, since you have some errors.
I could offer to, but I wasn't born in an English-speaking country, being from Sweden and all. It's always best to have a beta from an English-speaking country, since they know the language the most.
However, I'm pretty good at the language, so if no one else is offering, I would be happy to. My email adress is on my profile, if you're interested...
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs