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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens....I love it!
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May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!Awesome cliffhanger!!! Can;t beleive that Kakashi and Iruka knew the birthparent of Naruto and Kyuubi, and has neeevveeer told Naruto!!
I totalylooove where u heading with this story!! U kept it interesting, no part did it ever got boring!! U kept me on my toes, anticipating more!!! I can;t wait for the next chappies to come out!!! Can't wait how u will let everythn work out together!!! Keep up the good work!!
Update as soon as you can!!!f
Ya ne
I totalylooove where u heading with this story!! U kept it interesting, no part did it ever got boring!! U kept me on my toes, anticipating more!!! I can;t wait for the next chappies to come out!!! Can't wait how u will let everythn work out together!!! Keep up the good work!!
Update as soon as you can!!!f
Ya ne
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story! I can't wait for chapter 10. When will Itachi and Sasuke get back into contact with Naruto? Will Naruto forgive them? Also, Kakashi knew Naruto's parents?! What a twist...
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please, start your new scenes by at least telling us who the character is that your righting about. I am so tired of you starting a new scene with 'he this' or 'he that' without telling us who 'he' is until many paragraphs down. It's amateurish and frustrating! We can't read your mind to figure out who he is. So unless your just trying to be mysterious, it gets pretty old really fast.
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! An update! I would say this made my day, but I think it actually just made my whole week!:D Definitely worth the wait, another outstanding chapter. Getting really, really good now (not that it wasn't before, but now it has a bit of a twist maybe?). I'm wondering what Itachi is hiding from Sasuke, and the ending has me very curious with the picture Kyuubi and Naruto found. Can't wait for the next update, this is one of my favorite fics on here!^_^
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just can't decide who to root for!!!!! Itachi loves him but is acting bizarre, Sasuke misses him and can't take it anymore, Naruto can't forget them and still thinks they didn't love him, and is Tobi single? arrgggg!!!!
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So I went back and read through this story again, and I gotta say I think I love it even more now than before (and still don't care about AFF's crazy format problems with a few chapters, this story is definitely worth the time reading around it). Still one of my favorites on here, I absolutely love the way you write. I do hope you decide to continue with this as I see it hasn't been updated in a year and a half, I'm really anxious to find out how this ends. Hope to read more soon!:D
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and I am totally clueless on who Naruto will eventually be paired up with. A threesome with Itachi and Sasuke? Just Itachi? Kyuubi? I don't see Neji or just Sasuke as being very likely. It's very different not knowing the pairing so I hope you post soon :)
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
and was it just me... or was there a whole lot of weird script and font information throughout many of the chapters? I've never seen anything like it and wondered if maybe aff was having a malfunction or something.
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hiya! i almost jumped out of my chair when i saw the update. ;-) you've done a good job on this chappie, and i can't wait for the s*&t to hit the fan when itasasu catches up. i'd also be curious to know if kyuu finds out naru is gay before they show up? hmmm, the possibilities! LOL