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Great story!!!! Even though I enjoy ita/naru/sasu stories, it's a great relief to find one where naruto is actually upset seeing the Uchia brothers together when he's dating one. In all the other stories I read, Naruto immediately gets turned on and jumps into the fray. Plus the story line is making sit on the edge of my seat wondering what other types of punishment awaits the brothers. I can't wait to read Gaara's interaction with them. Update soon!!

omg this is GREAT i luv it i hope u keep going i'd die if you stop

hey there! i know i've reviewed already but could i give you one more 2 cents worth? someone else mentioned having neji be a contender for naru's affection after his recovery; i second that motion! it seems to be "normal" for hyuugas and uchihas to be competitive, and this way, itasasu has to work it to get naru back. personally, i think neji should win eventually, but that's just me. LOL!

at first i'm kind of pissed, becoz it took you too long to update, but after i read the newest chapter, it was worth it!!!!!!!!!! i love iiiittttttt!!!!!!!!! keep updating please, i relly need to read more... i hope naru will be happy with somebody else that never cheated on him......

I was suprised to hear this was your first fic...it's very well-written. I definately know who I want him to end up with, but as the author that is, of course your decision. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
~narugal101

I don't care how the format is, I'll still read this story! Your story is awesome, I always look forward to updates. This is one of my favorite stories on this site, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!^_^

it was genuine. Believe me i love this story sooooo much. I dont think I have ever left a sarcastic review...cause if i dont like it I dont review. I mean, for all i know my taste is the one that sux, why take up ppls time with negative notices?


But yey, cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!

Dace

*although I am really strating to get annoyed that aff.nets pages are taking SO FRIGGEN long to load the past few days......whats going on???
- my code is $100 culinary...thats really expensive. Wonder what I'm getting (lol)

This chapter was oure greatness! I loved Kakashi and Iruka's confrontation with the Uchiha's, they did deserve what they got. I'm still angry at them for treating Naruto the way they did, I understand why he would believe that he was used only as a shield. It's going to take a miracle for the brothers to be able to fix this mess that they've created.

Gaara with the axe was genious...I love that crazy redhead and I hope that he will go to the Uchiha mansion and threaten them some.

The first glimpse of Kyuubi was great and judging from this snippet you're writing him wonderfully! It seems as if he at least remembers Naruto and I can't wait to find out what will happen next.

Such an amazing chapter that again left me on the edge of my seat craving more. Your writing is captivating and enchanting. Thank you so much for this chapter and I'm already longing to read more.

Helt, helt underbart, jag bugar inför din talang!

I wasn't expecting much and when I read the pairings in the first chapter I dind't think much (I despite anything Uchiha relate) but I read on. Depressing fics like this always seemed to be my weakness but then you add hte part about Naruto having a older brother and I jsut had to read on. I really don't like Sai but in your fic I could have kissed him (cheek never lips)!! I know you said you don't have any pairings decided yet but please, I am begging/pleading with you, in the end DO NOT have Naruto go back to those--fakers. The fact that they never told him about their relationship, they kept it hidden for years, and dind't even think of hte consequences or even have the balls to tell that little sunshine themselves is really low as they come. They deserve to be shunned by everyone they know, to be given the cold shoulder, to have the world know that these two fucked up so bad their existnace will forever be a nightmare. But, this is your fic and you decide the outcome. I did like the cliffhanger at the end of the 4th chapter, I am gonna wait anxiously for hte next one, I hope its a good family reunion!!

wow! i was on pins and needles during this chappie, and the ending was perfect! you evil person you! nah, i'm not going to crucify you for the cliffie cause it was just too cool.

so the uchihas want a threesome? pleeeeeease make them work for it, if you end up doing that. i mean, they need to beg, beg, and beg then maybe kiss butt a lot. hahaha! ooo, can kyuubi kick butt too? i like angst, and i want naru to come out on top, i just don't want him to just up and forgive the uchihas right away, if at all.

i like the way you're having them suffer, by the way. not over the top, but effective; no information and let them stew. yep, you rock!