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by ItaNarulover

person Gingitsune
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! A new chapter!!! Now I start to see their motivation. They are in love with each other and yet with Naruto. I could see a threesome happening between them. But right now everything's a huge mess. I got cheated on before and it took a long time before I was able to forgive that dude so I can sort of empathize with Naruto. Hmm....so Kyuubi is a twin brother? Love to how you are going to develop this story. Good luck with school!
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The formatting does not effect the chapter. It was brilliant. The self-deluison of the self-centered Uchiha's, to Kiba knowing Neji is in love with Naruto, which means everyone will know and propbally try and hook them up when Naruto is 'better'. Gaaara was the best, he is my hero. Kakashi was a close second, he is so sadisitic... I had hoped to see more of Sai, he is going through major guilt I bet. Can't wait for next chapter. Hmmm. I wonder if Kyubi will go big-brother and join gaara in torturing the cheaters!
person RyuEarth
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First time reading and reviewing and I have to say that I never go out of KakaIru, but this was very good! XD
I enjoyed it very much and I'm going to be looking forward to alot more! (though secretly I really wanted Gaara to use that axe) ^^;
person TheSimi
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I've missed this chapter!!! I'm so ashamed...this is one of my favorite stories and I missed a new chapter for several weeks. ;_:

It was an amazing chapter! My heart still aches for Naruto...I really hope with my fingers crossed that Kyuubi won't turn him away, Naruto needs someone who will care for him now, someone whose not part of his life with the Uchiha's.

I agree with Sai and I'm having a hard time feeling any sympathy for the Uchiha brothers. Naruto would have understand if they had been honest with him, he's just that kind of person but instead they decieved him and went behind his back. And like Sai also said he believed he would get married and start a family, what were they thinking treating him like that?

I can't wait to find out what will happen next, What will Kakashi, Gaara and the others do when they find out what Itachi and Sasuke has done? How will the brothers react when they get the parcel containinf the ring? How can they ever make this right?

Thank you so much for a wonderful chapter and I' already longing for the next one (which I hopefully won't miss)

Jorå här har du en annan svensk...Det var ett underbart känsloladdat kapitel...FANTASTISKT!!! <3
person Nikana
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow!!!! that was intense!!! please make sure to torture "pretty brothers" a little more for been the lovely misunderstood couple who do love Naruto but can not live without each other.... cheaters!!!!!! muahaha! make them suffer!
Now seriously, do continue the story,please, it is very good and if it is possible fix the format because is somewhat complicated to follow without the separating lines.I know this site tends to change the original document,so i hope you can do something about it^^
ByE
person Usha
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gah, why did you have to end it there?! I'm going to love to see what happens when everyone finds out what they did, and even more so when they get the ring that Naruto sends back to them. I hope you update soon, I love this story. ^^
person Mickii
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How could they! Sick disgusting horrible asdfjkl fooling behind sweet&innocent Naruto's back! I'm normally a huge SasuNaru and ItaNaru fan but here I hope they least suffer for rest of their lives. Great story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Laraine
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.o Wow, Sai at the end there was amazing. I hope you get Gaara and the boys to kick the Uchiha's where the sun doesn't shine. Poor Naruto.
Ahem, anyway, this story is very good. You're developing quite the complex plot here, I can't wait to see what you have in store.
^^
person RandaLyn
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ack! >dies a little inside< XP Stupid cliff hangers. Horrible writers who write it. Yes I AM making faces at the computer screen right now, what of it? But I did promise an imaginary cookie for this chapter so you shall get it. But where is this imaginary cookie you ask? Well I hid it in the next chapter of your story! Dun dun duuuu! HAHA! Find it if you can! Once again good job with grammar, blah, the extra information at the bottom was very helpful, blah.

Oh, and I found the Barney porn. What's that? Why yes, I AM scared for life, thank you for asking.

As for joining the dark side...Let's just say JT is bringing sexy back but I'M bringing evil back. ^_~ ....as I sound all happy and perky... still... I try... that counts... TT~TT

And seeing as though my threat-tactic review/rant worked last time lets not fix what's not broken! Ahem! Evil music. Yes that song is very evil. Dark lighting. No a bit dimmer. There, perfect! Vincent Price voice...Ah yes that's where I put the cigarettes. Now...
"The Dark Lord DEMANDS a new chapter of this wonderful story or I will feed your soul to the ravines, blood sick creatures know as hamsters. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! And they're wearing little pirate costumes! How cute is that? .... Err...I mean FEAR ME! And update soon!"
person BumbleBee
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont like it...I LOVE it!!

It was as always well written and just heartbreaking *bows* but at one part I had to laugh...Gaara and Hinata! Thats funny =) I know many couple variations but I never heard of this one^^

anyway I just love the plot and you can literally feel any kind of emotions.
I hope you update soon again =)