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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
waaaa......I want more depressing angst!!!!!!!!!! Gimme more!
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i do love your story, it's official now. i really hate sasuke and itachi, so don't go and pairing them with naruto.. pleeeaaassseeeee...... and i hope you can update sooner, becoz i keep waiting your new chapter.
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Argh! This is my second time trying to review since the page crashed on me :( I got to say that I really hope that your Naruto will move on and find someone else to love. They started the affair before Itachi got engaged to Naruto? And they used Naruto as a cover? Unforgivable! Maybe KyuNaru? :)
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah ... uchihas SUCK!!! LOL! ok, maybe not totally but still. anyway, love this chappie and can't wait to watch the fireworks when sai tells the gang what happened. could we expect some blood, massive swearing, and maybe some missing body parts from the uchiha couple? please let them suffer. i'm a itnaru sasunaru fan as much as anybody, but they really need to suffer. please let naru find someone else to help heal him (on knees begging), maybe kyuubi can introduce him to someone, and then hire thugs to beat itasasu up.
LOL! loving this fic .. keep up the good work
LOL! loving this fic .. keep up the good work
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sai was so fucking awesome! He is such a true friend, unlike Sasuke. Besides Sasuke and Itachi have this idea in mind that they would just find Naruto, apologize and just bring him back but they need to know that things don't work that way, its not going to be that easy. And it's nice to see Sasuke (and Itachi) chasing Naruto for a change and wanting to bring him back home, instead of Naruto talking about how he is going to drag Sasuke back to Konoha, lol!
It was nice to find out some more about Kyuubi. I can't wait to meet him!
This was a good chapter, looking forward to the next one.
It was nice to find out some more about Kyuubi. I can't wait to meet him!
This was a good chapter, looking forward to the next one.
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this has got to be one of the best stories i ever read!!
i can't wait for the next chapter to be posted!!
Hope you post soon! Thank you
i can't wait for the next chapter to be posted!!
Hope you post soon! Thank you
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see you had updated this story. I'm really enjoying it. I don't know how Itachi and Sasuke are going to get themselves out of this mess, but I hope that Naruto can find his brother and some happiness. But he really should contact his fathers at least!
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i reeeeeeaaaalllyyyy love your story!!!! please update soon!!!
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ack! What the hell? You horrible person you! How can you just leave it like that? You sadist, you like making people suffer not only in fics but in real life too, don't you? TT~TT Your probably smirking now at how evil you are and how all the other fan girls(or boys) are suffering, waiting, WANTING, but not getting any more chapters fast enough (It should be done by now! Damnit) That said (and well ment) A++ for grammar and English (although I probably would have blocked it out if u wr0t l1kje dis) God I hope this upcoming threat is enough to get more chapters, at least 2. Ahem. Finish or I'll find you and upload horrible Barney porn and make you watch. Where will I find such hell spawned and twisted garbage you might ask. I will find it if I have to make it myself no matter what the cost to my soul! Fear the fan girl’s wrath!
.....I love you....
And as a desperate last attempt to make you laugh (or you know...update) I have a completely imaginary cookie that you may have if you update. I only hope that my threats and bribery attempts as well as other reviews succeed. May the power of the fan girl be with you always.
.....I love you....
And as a desperate last attempt to make you laugh (or you know...update) I have a completely imaginary cookie that you may have if you update. I only hope that my threats and bribery attempts as well as other reviews succeed. May the power of the fan girl be with you always.
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I see by your rec on Brutally Beautifull that your not a fan of Uchihacest. Actually I generally avoid all the incest fics but I decided to give this a shot even though it was pretty clear where it was going.
Red head would be Kyuubi wouldn't it? Naruto is kind of being guided to reconnect with his brother. Hope that goes well for him, at this stage he needs something to turn out right for him.
As for who Naruto ends up with, I know your are an Itachi Naruto fan, pretty clear from your name, it is going to be tough for it to work out this time. Honestly, how many guys do you know who go back to the person who cheated on them. Now make it with their best friend. Sasuke might have had a better shot at regaining his friendship, since guys tend to forgive each other a little better than the cheater, except that it seems pretty clear that they have been using Naruto as cover pretty much since the begining. Even the adoption thing will probably occur to him. Not like they are likely to allow to brothers engaged in incest to adopt but Itachi in a stable relationship with Naruto could. And Sasuke would be right there raising it. That isn't something Naruto is likely to forgive. Trusting either of them again is going to tough.
If you go that route I will be looking forward to how you manage. I hope that if you do they have to work for it, no way should it be easy for them to regain anything from Naruto.
On the other hand if you decide to have him with someone else, even temporarily, I notice you are a Deidara fan. You're right there aren't many out there, be intresting to see the blonds together here.
Red head would be Kyuubi wouldn't it? Naruto is kind of being guided to reconnect with his brother. Hope that goes well for him, at this stage he needs something to turn out right for him.
As for who Naruto ends up with, I know your are an Itachi Naruto fan, pretty clear from your name, it is going to be tough for it to work out this time. Honestly, how many guys do you know who go back to the person who cheated on them. Now make it with their best friend. Sasuke might have had a better shot at regaining his friendship, since guys tend to forgive each other a little better than the cheater, except that it seems pretty clear that they have been using Naruto as cover pretty much since the begining. Even the adoption thing will probably occur to him. Not like they are likely to allow to brothers engaged in incest to adopt but Itachi in a stable relationship with Naruto could. And Sasuke would be right there raising it. That isn't something Naruto is likely to forgive. Trusting either of them again is going to tough.
If you go that route I will be looking forward to how you manage. I hope that if you do they have to work for it, no way should it be easy for them to regain anything from Naruto.
On the other hand if you decide to have him with someone else, even temporarily, I notice you are a Deidara fan. You're right there aren't many out there, be intresting to see the blonds together here.