rate_review Reviews

Wow.. this is an excellent read! Interesting story line, nice flow of descriptions and not too wordy, and well.. amazing. I usually don't read stories with OOCness (bound to happen in AU), but this was amazing and.. yea. They stayed somewhat to their characters. :) Nice job, 5/5! Hope to see next update soon!

oh i love this story so far. but it really makes me sad when naru is hurting and confused. those damn bastards!! i wonder if they will work things out? maybe?

i hope you update regularly.

Poor Naru! One thing I love about well written caught in the act fics is that they are so realistic, the pain is so realistic. Itachi's response is just like a selfish cheaters would be and Sasuke's reaction is definitely one along the line of the best friend who slept with the husband. It's always funny because its like 'what did you think was going to happen when they found out?' But people don't always think of that! I loved Naruto's reaction as well and I just hope that he doesn't forgive so easily, that is if he does forgive.

Also I think that part about Naruto's brother was interesting, wonder what's the history behind that?

OMG I had almost all the time goosebumps!! Poor Naruto, I feel so sorry for him but it was still freaking amazing=) Cant wait for the next chapter *hope you update soon*

Oooh This was another absolutely wonderful chapter! I could really feel Naruto's pain as he watched the man he loved in bed with his best friend. I understand why Naruto felt that he had to leave. You made me cry with the card in the flowers you eeevil being... So what will happen now? Will the Uchiha brothers find Naruto and if they do will the blond be willing to talk to them?

Thank you so much for this amazing chapter, I can't wait to read more!

Helt fantastiskt bra!!!!

Wow, just read this and I have to say it really hits you with emotions. Me personally, couldn't care that he is screwing his brother its more the fact 'a fiancee was cheating with best friend', and for a long time obviously. So shouldn't forgive. Especially when the two upon realizing he saw them were upset for selfish reasons, not even feeling guilt about the fact they claim to care about Naruto yet have been lying to him and planning to keep lying. I want to see the two suffer, cause that is the worst you can do to someone. As I have told a few friends who caught fiancee screwing behind back, "no forgivness" cause that is beyond low...Glad Naruto left!

holy shit! that made my heart ache for poor naru-chan!!! TT.TT i wanna see what those two bastards do! (they have it coming to them! I bet ya kakashi beats them up... *insert evil kackle here* i cant wait... *bum bum buuuuuuum*

what happen next. poor naruto-chan. update plz.

i like this chapter! i was afraid we wouldn't get the uchiha reaction until the next chapter. now, i'm an itanaru fan as well as the next gal, but i'd really like it if ita and sasu could suffer a bit, and maybe have naru start something with someone else to make them jealous. hehehehe! course i am totally sure your artistic genius has something in mind, yes?

see ya!

Love it and I can't wait for the next part, give up and I will stalk you. I know where you live :P