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for Kyuubi's Pet

by TJChaos

person Streti
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not normally interested in Naruto, but I just had to read this fic after your FF4 story. I'm impressed! This is incredible, so imaginative! The scene in the first chapter where Sakura becomes corrupted sets the mood very nicely, and chapter 2 just ups the ante with the intense dual sex scenes. And then the incredible mastery of perversion in chapter 4, what a huge climax for part 1! The setting for part 2 is very tantalizing, and after checking some pics of Hinata, the idea of her just in heels (and a collar) is very appealing. Would have liked to see more detailed scenes with her. The finish wraps up nicely, but I felt it was lacking that big climax that part 1 had. But all in all a fantastic story with great humor, the flow of it is superb. Much props!

If you happened to have any story recommendations, I would be interested in hearing them out. Cheers!
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most hilarious yet awesomely sexy and awesomely perverse fics I've ever read. All that freaking depravity . . . and yet, everything ends just fine. Wait, how was Naruto asleep for all that time while Sakura was doing what she was doing? Was he getting buzzed, too? So wrong . . . that it crosses the line into being right. (Am I wrong for thinking that futanari!Sakura doing Ino was the hottest part of all, excepting Kyubi!Naruto and Hinata's scene?)