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by kodak85

person Enzeru
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter but PLEASE! Take it easy on the time skips and flashbacks! At a certain point they began to get rather annoying and truth be told I got a little confused every now and again.
person Enzeru
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter but PLEASE! Take it easy on the time skips and flashbacks! At a certain point they began to get rather annoying and truth be told I got a little confused every now and again.
person Enzeru
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. This story is more than promising and I can't wait for the next chapter. Because I am just dying to know what 'Sasuke's way' is exactly. More dominance and possessiveness, perhaps? *Squeal* I'm excited just thinking about it!!! XD
person DewiSri
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I truely enjoy your story. I hope you update soon again.
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well Im new to the story and I've just fallen in love! lol. The kay and keh difference that you now input is good. It helped me because sometimes I was confused. I like this plotline alot. At first I didnt want to read another vampire story, but this drew me in. I cant wait to see more.
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Have to say I like this chapter it gives great background to how Sasuke and Naruto met. And I really like how you have Sasuke craving for companionship but unable to do anything about it. Until he meets his klutz.
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderful ^.^!! I can't wait til you update! soon hopefully~ I love this story I'm so curious as to how it's going to turn out! I feel so bad for both sasuke's I'm torn on who should end up with naruto~
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are brilliant and I love this story. And I am so glad that Sasuke/vamp is doing it his way...makes me wonder who he listened to about how to approach Naruto and make him remember.
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
After every chapter you have updated I am stuck thinking about it... ^___^ & I LOVE IT!! This chapter has me all psyched out! *__*
I want naruto to get away from vamp Sasuke but I know that if he breaks there deal, then Sasuke wins... I hope Naruto remember's that!! Either that or Naruto actually get's to a safe place & away from vamp Sasuke. And where is living Sasuke?!
person BumbleBee
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sooooo love that story. Thank you so much for writing it. Hope you update soon I cant really want to know how it goes on. How many chapters are there going to be?