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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh please hurry and update as soon as you can. You have me on pins and needles. Also, whats the other Sasuke doing? Haven't read anything about him for at least two chapters.
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God finally! I am getting so friggen frustrated. PLEASE LET HIM GOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Damn.
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't see a poll anywhere :( And wow another great chapter of "Teeth". I understand your comment about Vamp!Sasuke's opinions but the feminisit in me still rebels against one person being less than another in a relationship, even if one does submit sexually to another. And whats this, Naruto's getting more comfortable, oh no! I really do want Hum!Sasuke to come in and rescue him. For whatever reason I've come to favor him over Vamp!Sasuke, although I do sympathize with him about having to listen to "Mama Mia" >.> Anyway, great job on the chapter and I look forward to any other updates you may have coming.
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Please don't stop! I hope Naruto escapes vamp Sasuke ;__;
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont see a poll! I hope you are not discontinuing! I love this story!
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I got the chills, I love this fic, I am really excited to see where you take this thing
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter!
It was great. Sasuke's getting closer to the truth, while Naruto's starting to remember.
I love vamp-Sasuke so much, I hope he and Naruto will end up together, even though the real Sasuke's still out there. Or they could always have a threesome? hehe...just kidding...although my inner pervert wouldn't mind it....
Anyway...I can't wait to see how Sasuke will react once he finds out....update soon.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. =^_^= Hugs
It was great. Sasuke's getting closer to the truth, while Naruto's starting to remember.
I love vamp-Sasuke so much, I hope he and Naruto will end up together, even though the real Sasuke's still out there. Or they could always have a threesome? hehe...just kidding...although my inner pervert wouldn't mind it....
Anyway...I can't wait to see how Sasuke will react once he finds out....update soon.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. =^_^= Hugs
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going through emotional hell along with the characters!
One minute I'm pro-human-sasuke the next I'm pro-vampire-sasuke. I'm hoping for some twisted miracle in which they can all be happy, because I'm a sap. Although I don't see it happening.
Your story is total mind fuckeriy-which is why it's brilliant!
I've never read anything that could be both dramatic and funny. Your writing style if fantastic and always leaves me wanting more.
I look forward to reading your next chapter, and I'll try to refrain from going insane as a wait in the mean time.
Keelar.
P.S: Twilight mockery xD
One minute I'm pro-human-sasuke the next I'm pro-vampire-sasuke. I'm hoping for some twisted miracle in which they can all be happy, because I'm a sap. Although I don't see it happening.
Your story is total mind fuckeriy-which is why it's brilliant!
I've never read anything that could be both dramatic and funny. Your writing style if fantastic and always leaves me wanting more.
I look forward to reading your next chapter, and I'll try to refrain from going insane as a wait in the mean time.
Keelar.
P.S: Twilight mockery xD
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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The main artery in the neck is the carotid artery which goes directly to the brain. The main vein in the neck is the jugular vein which combines with the the subclavian to form the brachiocephalic which supplies the superior vena cava which then empties into the right atrium of the heart. In other words, the jugular vein goes to the heart, not an artery. Arteries carry blood AWAY from the heart, veins carry blood TO the heart. I think that Sasuke would know this, seeing as he's a vampire and all and needs to know from which vessels to feed. Love your story, by the way. 'S very well written and relatively original. I say 'relatively' because I wouldn't call any vampire story a completely novel experience. Extremeley nice, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing.
The main artery in the neck is the carotid artery which goes directly to the brain. The main vein in the neck is the jugular vein which combines with the the subclavian to form the brachiocephalic which supplies the superior vena cava which then empties into the right atrium of the heart. In other words, the jugular vein goes to the heart, not an artery. Arteries carry blood AWAY from the heart, veins carry blood TO the heart. I think that Sasuke would know this, seeing as he's a vampire and all and needs to know from which vessels to feed. Love your story, by the way. 'S very well written and relatively original. I say 'relatively' because I wouldn't call any vampire story a completely novel experience. Extremeley nice, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing.
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How come you called it chapter six? I was reading this on Ochiba.net as well and I almost got confused but no matter. What a strange but fascinating little story you have going here. Two Sasuke's fighting against each other, I don't know who to root for. I am rooting the most for the human Sasuke because his pain is fresher and I can identify with him better as a reader. However although the vampire Sasuke brought up some valid points about what might be wrong with Sasuke and Naruto's relationship, I also feel it's none of his business, given time their relationship would have grown stronger and got to the level he feels it should be at. He's stealing from himself, he lost his Naruto maybe through no fault of his own but is this what is going to go on forever? Is he going to continue waiting for new Naruto's to be born, grow up, fall in love with his current reincarnation and then steal Naruto away? From vampire Sasuke's answers about the his past, I'm not sure how he got turned into a vampire and not Naruto as well or how he woke up a vampire at all.
I'm starting to worry that Naruto will never escape because he is starting to fall for vampire Sasuke no matter his denials because Sasuke has the upper hand. Naruto is starting to remember his past life with vampire Sasuke and maybe starting to forget his current one with human Sasuke. I am loving the dichotomy in this story and I have no idea where this is going and that's a good thing.
I'm starting to worry that Naruto will never escape because he is starting to fall for vampire Sasuke no matter his denials because Sasuke has the upper hand. Naruto is starting to remember his past life with vampire Sasuke and maybe starting to forget his current one with human Sasuke. I am loving the dichotomy in this story and I have no idea where this is going and that's a good thing.