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for Naruto, You're Not Pregnant!

by Jelp

schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome chap, jelp. i cant wait to hear naru tell tsunande who the mommy/daddy is. keep up the great work!

~Devious
person Onikage
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Loved that chapter.. ^.^

It was great, i love it.
person realitybites
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fantastic!! i can't wait for the next chapter

and the katon tag on the milk?! haha. so cute
person Mimori
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am loving this story. you need to right more. i've also read your other stories and i love them too. especially desperation, i love how hinata acted to get naruto. it seemed so out of character for her. anyways back to my review of this story. i loved, i want more of it, and it rocked. sasuke had naruto's baby...that was awesome. >.<
person Rachel
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bahaha, you gave Sasuke Klinefelter's syndrome? You made me feel smart, because I actually knew what that was before reading this! Man, you must be really putting some thought into this fic with all the medical mumbo-jumbo actually making some sort of sense...(even though its not ACTUALLY possible)...I'm loving this fic. It was up first on the new fics list, and I was very excited :)
person calypso
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude, my brother actually has klinefelter syndrome...hahahah o.k not actually funny, but kudos on getting your info pretty accurate
person Jan
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is Sasuke ever going to return to Naruto? Are they going to become a family?

Please update chapter 4 soon ^_^

Jan
person qwerty
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Crazy good chapter.
Keep going!
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol... 'Everybody out!"

^^

Keep up the great work!
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I am not usually a Naru/Sasu fan but with a plot like that I had to at least read the first chapter. Jelp, once again you have proven you are a master of the written word.